| "Afterwards" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: continuation of last review *laughs awkwardly*
Reviewed By: Forlorn Essence [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 17:08 CDT
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...but I would be behind you 100%!!!! Just a note, if there was any way to go above 10/10 and above 100%, I think there would have to be "..."'s to express the rating I would give you. I hope to hear more from you and hopefully this fic. -F.E*
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Reviewed By: Forlorn Essence [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2005 17:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"I have long realized that this chapter will never last forever. A sequel to war is not impossible. Who knows when war might break out again? No one knows. There will be a day when we are all sitting here like this at one long table, sharing our ideas and thoughts like comrades. There will be another day when we erect barbed fences and spit venomous words at each other, exchanging life for another life. The peaceful blue sky might change into a dreary gray that may never return to its former color. I will tell you all my ultimate remedy to our difficulty." because of lines like this, I was so attracted to your fanfiction. Gundam Seed has become my favourite anime recently, and this fanfiction, I found, was an astounding joy to come across. The detail completely rendered me speechless and all the information and the realism of the characters has made me fall in love with your writing styles. Some grammer and spelling in some areas, but a perfect fic, to say the least. I love it!! I am appalled, to say in the least, that you have not updated in quite a long time, and just when I found that my eyes were unable to be torn away from my moniter, I find no link to take me to the next chapter! Fanfictions this good are hard to come by, and with detail, descriptions and information so wonderful and accurate, I would only pray (and beg if I had to) that you would continue on with it. I suppose that praise is sometimes not enough to encourage you to go on, but I would be behind y |
Title: xD AsuCag
Reviewed By: Eärendil On: November 03, 2004 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wii! I liked this story so much, please keep going, because I'll read the next chapters for sure! (if you can e-mail me and let me know!) bye bye my email: shady_laddy@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: tennis tensai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2004 23:30 CDT
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Your fan fic rocks!!!!! I just like the athrun and cagalli love scene..It's not too romantic and not tooo dull .Good work.. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Keirin-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 17:14 CDT
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I love your fanfic I hope that you update soon. ~Jazz PS Do you have a fanfiction.net account If you do Email me At SLIMEYWINTERBEAN@yahoo.com and tell me what your screenname is. Thanks
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Reviewed By: Nap2x On: July 04, 2004 04:56 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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please! WRITE MORE!!! I begggggggg youuuuuuu!
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Reviewed By: nao-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 01:25 CDT
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XD!! eeeeeee! What Yazk said made me crack up LOL your really good at writing! can't wait for an update! (U-U imma bad speller ... if stuffs spelled wrong)put it on fanfic.net if you haven't!
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Reviewed By: nao-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 01:25 CDT
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XD!! eeeeeee! What Yazk said made me crack up LOL your really good at writing! can't wait for an update! (U-U imma bad speller ... if stuffs spelled wrong)put it on fanfic.net if you haven't!
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Reviewed By: nao-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 01:24 CDT
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XD!! eeeeeee! What Yazk said made me crack up LOL your really good at writing! can't wait for an update! (U-U imma bad speller ... if stuffs spelled wrong)put it on fanfic.net if you haven't!
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Reviewed By: SilverNimbus On: June 16, 2004 02:53 CDT
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it's rare to find a good fanfic writer and even more rare to find a k/a author... PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!! and don't forget to post at fanfiction.net... thank you for the great read, you rock.
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Reviewed By: nao-chan On: June 03, 2004 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Mostly because is athrun and cagalli. Well written, nice characters new and old, and i liked how you made the old characters in chara, and also a little out of chara. keep gooooooooiiiinnnnggg!
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Reviewed By: Sanddruid On: May 24, 2004 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Fic!! Please continue, there aren't enough Athrun and Cagalli fics.^_^
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