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| "Kenryoku" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: Razor Wind [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2004 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hello Digidudette, you cannot hide, I shall find you heh good, nice idea, though squall's child idea has been used before this is good, 9, for the first chapter, keep going RAZOR WIND
| Title: I'm actually in a fanfiction? Yayy!!
Reviewed By: AmyAnderson45 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that's a first! I've never read a fanfiction that had my name in it. Very fascinating...not because of the name and all, but it's actually a very good fanfiction. There's just a few mistakes, but it's not that bad. It's just the dialogue when you keep stating the "he said, she said." It's not that big of a deal really because you used different words such as "he replied or she sighed." I will without a doubt look forward to reading how this story will play out. Just remember, if you kill Amy off, then that's the end for me...just kidding! Even if you do kill me off, I wouldn't mind seeing how it all dramatically ends. Just give me a fighting chance first and then kill me off as quick as you can:-)
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