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| "The Butterfly" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] | Title: HOLY WOW
Reviewed By: theSKiEisFALLING [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2006 00:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEESH! I finally found the SasuSaku fic I was yearning for all this time! Gee. This totally made my day. Please do something else like this... *coughsequelcough* My rating would exceed a thousand if it would let me. Hehe. Keep up the fantastic job!
| Title: what?
Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 00:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish I could give you a 12 for the originality part. I've been hunting down this story on all sites, I started on blissfulignorance, then fanfiction.net but when I saw the lemon cut out I had to come here and then you didn't show up on the search results. What a drag, but the story was GREAT! So great in fact that I'm confused that you only have 11 reviews? I mean WTF? Seriously, I thought this story was great, though I wasn't too happy with the short ending, I still loved it. Characters were in character, people were developed well and I loved Garra hahahahah nuff said. Anyway, I really hope that more people read this story it's a great naruto fic and an even better sask saku story, (seeing as how there are so few out there with GREAT quality like yours.) I added you to my favorites because I loved your stuff, hope to get more out of you soon.
| Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 21:16 CST
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Wow. That was wonderful. I am so glad i decided to read this fic. I almost didn't, you know. I thought it was going to be one of those tedious angsty fics where you have to force yourself to wade throught emotional turmoil so this you can taste it, just to reach the few good points of the story. I was very pleasantly surprised. THe story flowed so well that before i knew it, i had finished the entire thing in one sitting. The evolution of the character's personalities was completely completely natural, and you made it seem like there was no other reasonable outcome other than the once you wrote. Your descriptions were amazing, and when i reached the end, it felt like waking from a particularly realistic dream. While i suspect there were people that weren't happy with your choice of an ending, i have to say that i loved it. Sometimes, when there is too much that needs to be worked through, and come to terms with, all you can do is start with a clean slate. i guess ultimately, what i'm trying to say is that you have a fantastic piece of writing here. Not to say it is perfect, but that, to me, is one of it's charms. Thank you for sharing this with us, and for the love of god, keep writing!
| Title: Draining...
Reviewed By: akire_11 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 10:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh God!!! You are really good, Tea Leaf! I'm just a newbee in the Fan-fic world but I'm dead sure that this fic of yours ROCKS! Actually...I've seen this fiction of yours at AdultFanFiction.net but...I don't know, I hesitated on reading it. Until I saw your fan-fic again at FF.Net did i made up my mind to actually read it. I copy-pasted it in my computer 2 weeks ago (i hope u don't mind?) but I've only read it now...I couldn't stop reading! You're that good...I was supposed to post a comment at the FF.net but...Nothing....hehe...Anyways, i just want to congratulate you (even though it's super late already...)...I just hope that Hindsights 2020 is also good...I also copy-pasted it in my computer...net is expensive nowadays...Goodluck, okay? Ja ne. :P
| Reviewed By: bananagurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2005 11:23 CDT
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First off... GO BANANAS!! tee hee. Second, it was an interestin story. it wasn't really my type of story but it was okay.
| Reviewed By: YasashiiAme (nsi) On: February 25, 2005 23:09 CST
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Good fanfiction. I don't really have anything else to say, though it was filled with more grammar errors than I would have liked.
| Title: Super
Reviewed By: Ymanetta [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 08:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man your story is great i so glad that i read it. I stayed up all nite reading i and I'm so glad i did. I can't wait to read your other stories.
| Title: shutter_speeds@plasa.com
Reviewed By: tonoyoshi On: June 26, 2004 02:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, i'm so ashamed i missed a fic THIS good up until now. been spending my day today reading this piece from start to end in one go. And i know you must be bored with this already but this must be one of the best naruto fic ever. seriously. honestly. as a kakasaku fan, i'm a bit dejected that this ended with a sasusaku, since i really think he didn't deserve her. But with the way you portrayed kakashi and sakura relationship so superbly, i don't have much room to complain. And I think i don't want to^^ i guess the only thing I can complain is just how sakura just chose sasuke above kakashi. I mean, sasuke never really looked at her while kakashi always took care of her. It's a bit unsettling, but maybe it's just me ;)... Strangely though I always hope for a kakasaku ending, starting from when sakura stayed at sasuke's place, i knew it would be a sasusaku. And i'm glad you did the separating scene of kakashi and sakura so well. i really really love your style. Can I hope that you'll make a kakasaku fic after this? please? because my fave scenes in this fic were those with kakashi and sakura relationship in it^^! I love the way that whenever she struggled, in some way, kakashi was always there to help her stand again. they're so perfect! anyway, it's such a splendid fic, and I truly enjoyed reading it. thank you for writing this and sharing it with us ^^! I'll eagerly look forward for your next ficcies !
| Title: shutter_speeds@plasa.com
Reviewed By: tonoyoshi On: June 26, 2004 02:53 CDT
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okay, i'm so ashamed i missed a fic THIS good up until now. been spending my day today reading this piece from start to end in one go. And i know you must be bored with this already but this must be one of the best naruto fic ever. seriously. honestly. as a kakasaku fan, i'm a bit dejected that this ended with a sasusaku, since i really think he didn't deserve her. But with the way you portrayed kakashi and sakura relationship so superbly, i don't have much room to complain. And I think i don't want to^^ i guess the only thing I can complain is just how sakura just chose sasuke above kakashi. I mean, sasuke never really looked at her while kakashi always took care of her. It's a bit unsettling, but maybe it's just me ;)... Strangely though I always hope for a kakasaku ending, starting from when sakura stayed at sasuke's place, i knew it would be a sasusaku. And i'm glad you did the separating scene of kakashi and sakura so well. i really really love your style. Can I hope that you'll make a kakasaku fic after this? please? because my fave scenes in this fic were those with kakashi and sakura relationship in it^^! I love the way that whenever she struggled, in some way, kakashi was always there to help her stand again. they're so perfect! anyway, it's such a splendid fic, and I truly enjoyed reading it. thank you for writing this and sharing it with us ^^! I'll eagerly look forward for your next ficcies !
| Title: shutter_speeds@plasa.com
Reviewed By: tonoyoshi On: June 26, 2004 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, i'm so ashamed i missed a fic THIS good up until now. been spending my day today reading this piece from start to end in one go. And i know you must be bored with this already but this must be one of the best naruto fic ever. seriously. honestly. as a kakasaku fan, i'm a bit dejected that this ended with a sasusaku, since i really think he didn't deserve her. But with the way you portrayed kakashi and sakura relationship so superbly, i don't have much room to complain. And I think i don't want to^^ at least it was kakashi who always helped her to make the right move. I'm so glad he had so much influence in her life^^! Strangely though I always hope for a kakasaku ending, starting from when sakura stayed at sasuke's place, i knew it would be a sasusaku. And i'm glad you did the separating scene of kakashi and sakura so well. i really really love your style. Can I hope that you'll make a kakasaku fic after this? please? because my fave scenes in this fic were those with kakashi and sakura relationship in it^^! I love the way that whenever she struggled, in some way, kakashi was always there to help her stand again. they're so perfect! anyway, it's such a splendid fic, and I truly enjoyed reading it. thank you for writing this and sharing it with us ^^! I'll eagerly look forward for your next ficcies !
| Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 22:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY CRAP! that has got to be the best fanfic i have yet to read! it has mystery drauma (...i cant spell...) excitement fighting.... everything! wow, i am sooooo glad i found this! thank you so very much for the site! i am in love with naruto! it is awesome! and so is your story! yay naruto! i love the way you portrayed sakura, it shows a totally different side...( i cant be sure if she is like that later on in the manga cuz i am only up to the third chuunin trial...^_^ but ohh well) awesome fic, great disctiptions, it was easy to follow even tho when i started reading it i only knew kakashi sakura, sasuke, and naruto..oh and that kid...the hokage's grandson or whatever. but i didnt need to know the manga to understand the story! you rock as an author, i hope you update soon and write that horseshoe story! yay banana soap! UPDATE!!! p.s. guess what, you my favorite author on the many i have on my favorites list. i eagarly await your next update. ja!
| Reviewed By: Jessamaka On: April 27, 2004 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off.. I absolutely adore your fic. It's beautifully wriiten as though it seems to write itself.. Everything flows very smoothly. It's great how you update so frequently. I can't wait to read more.
| Reviewed By: DancingMonkeyLikeBanana On: April 22, 2004 16:24 CDT
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Please continue! I usually don't like these kind of fics, but yours has got me hooked. I hope she does get happy in the end though....and I like Kakashi/Sakura-ness....and Gaara/Sakura-ness.... er, I dunno. Sasuke is a poo (I read the manga). Anyways! You did a good job! Keep it up!
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