| "Warmth" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: more please
Reviewed By: sparkyaf On: November 12, 2004 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great story. I can't wait to see when akane finds out and if nabiki has other "business arrangements" with ranma's friends. I'd love for this to continue.
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Reviewed By: darkchun On: November 08, 2004 12:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was one piece that just begs to be continued. Once again you show us your amazing descriptive abilities, which engrosses readers and adds a level of depth most fanfics don't begin to reach. Please continue this and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: an author On: November 03, 2004 22:14 CST
Comment/Review:
will you write another chapter? i like this one
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Reviewed By: Chi Vayne On: June 13, 2004 19:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Your usual good job. It's difficult to come up with a plausible reason for Nabiki to get involved with Ranma, but I feel you've suceeded. I'd be interested to see where you could take this, and whether Nabiki would allow herself to get caught up with the insanity of Ranma's life.
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Reviewed By: Celeborn0 On: May 08, 2004 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have made a new good fic. But a N/R fic is normaly abused to death, hope you dont kill this one.
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Reviewed By: Voice out of the Shadow On: April 25, 2004 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm always in for a good R/N fic. And here is a rather good one (in my opinion). Please make a few more chapters. I really like this one.
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Reviewed By: The Critic On: April 22, 2004 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
If this fic were any better it would turn out to be a peice of crap.
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Reviewed By: Trash Guy On: April 22, 2004 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was disturbing.
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Reviewed By: Graham the Mighty [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 10:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whats this an N/R fic? Alrighty not enough of those if you ask me. Hope you continue this as its a really good read.
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Reviewed By: LordThom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2004 02:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fic, thought out story telling partnered with a alt-pairing I adore. Please continue if you have more to tell.
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