| "When a Heart Melts part 2" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: iy lvr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oooooooo. interesting. im glad u updated. I wish u would explain what the tree sprites look like, though. I'm having a little trouble trying to visulize them. but aside from that minor detail, it was another great chapter!^-^ oh, and about the word problem thingy, it might be that u moved the left indent in too much, or maybe even the right indent(on the ruler above). I don't know much about computers, but that happened to me once, and that might be the prob. as allways, update soon^..^
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Reviewed By: fireash(not logged on) On: September 02, 2004 14:52 CDT
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sorry the format is crazy. it looks alright in the program i typed it in so i don't know how to fix it really. if anyone knows please let me know so i can fix it.
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Reviewed By: animegirl007(not signed in) On: September 02, 2004 02:21 CDT
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I agree Lil'Inu...I glad you didn't give up on the story.....still good...update sooon
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 01:04 CDT
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hey! long time! glad you up dated, i was a little worried that you had given up on this one. can't wait to read more!! up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: iy lvr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 15:04 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooo. cool chapter. i wanna see more of the future Dr. Taisho. i like him ^-^. thanx again for the help with the name. i'm excited to see what happens in the next chapter, so update realiiii soon, k.? *-*
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 00:37 CDT
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the plot thickens. i like your story about the first tai youkai. can't wait to read what happens. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Can't wait for more..... On: May 31, 2004 19:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this....I can't wait until he realize his full power.....UPDATE SOON.....
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Reviewed By: mimi 86 On: May 23, 2004 15:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story so far. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: iy lvr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sounds interesting. can't wait to hear more ^_^.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 02:45 CDT
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i'm sorry to hear that you may not be up dating here. i looked at fanfiction.net when i first started looking at Inuyeasha fanfic but i haven't been there since. if you do decide to stop up dating here i'll probably go check it out. i want to know how the story ends and you are the only writer i know of that does good sess consentrated fic. don't worry about the han nyo spelling, i'm used to the old way too. it doesn't bother me at all, i just thought it was interesting to know the actual way. i have so many theories and suspitions about the story but i have two Japanese friends who i promised i'd show around DC tomorrow and their supposed to call me when they wake up so i got to go to bed. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: iy lvr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i havent reviewed till now, it took me a while to see you had written your other story ^-^'. I think that its really good. i cant wait to read the next chapter.there's just one thing: when you say "youkai", well youkai means demon, and youki means demon power/ energy ^_^. i hope that comment in the beginning of chapter 4 wasnt about me l-l. i feel really awfull that it always takes me sooo long to update. um, speaking of my story. i hate to do this in a review, but... Have you come up with a name for the reincarnation of Inuyasha? i've been trying to find one, but i dont even know where to start. *sigh* i havent written any chapters that answer any questions because i need a name, and my fans are getting angry. you're really good at finding names, so....
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 03:23 CDT
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aw no. he's a han nyo (i just found out that that is actually how you spell it go fig right?) in a youkai body. poor thing. up date soon and keep up the good work. oh and thank you, i had a very nice cinco de mayo.
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Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 21:14 CDT
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Reviewed By: animegirl007 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is interesting....to me it look like his son is having Inuyasha problem is controling his demon blood.....Plus, that future doctor is quite interesting too.....I can't wait for updates...please make them soon.....Thanks
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 02:12 CDT
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yo, sorry for the delay. i've been swamped with work. but today was the last day of classes so i'm all free till my finals. i'm also a little out of it right now, it being cinco de mayo and all. nehoo. like the chap. can't wait to find out when happens. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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