| "When a Heart Melts part 2" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 02:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
i'm sorry i haven't reviewed. i hadn't noticed that you had started a sequal. i shall add it to my list right now. ^_^ even though it doesn't have much of a plot i can tell that when it does it will be interesting, expecially with the addition of this general nefew guy. interesting indeed. wow. thinking about how powerfull Sesshy and Rin must be durring Kag's time makes me giddy. ^_^ can't wait to find out what happens. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: nonschool On: April 23, 2004 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good start thou still looking for the basic plot line of the story. I can think of several ways this could go ,so will looke to read more from you to get a ideal of where you comming from and where you are going.
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