"Haruka's Secret Desire" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: awesome! Reviewed By: Weapon-01 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 16:33 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Freaking funny. Haruka in a dress, I'd pay a nickel to see that.
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 18:41 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that was so...different. but i love it! absotively posolutely love it! and lol about the getting weird ideas when you're half asleep. once i got an diea for a story from a mcdonalds happy meal toy. and it was a hello kitty, of all things!
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Reviewed By: arrowofjane On: November 08, 2002 01:50 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It was simple and short, but still sweet. I loved the idea of Haruka's "rebellious mind" with the dress. I loved your story. |
Reviewed By: Big Fan On: May 18, 2002 06:14 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: THAT WAS proper jokes Geeze what do eat for breakfast!?! Finally I found something amusing once in my life of fanfics usaully I'd corny father telling jokes anyways keep it up love to read more!!! C= |