Title: very nice Reviewed By: Numisma [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 00:15 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: i cannot believe no one has left a single review for this. anyway, just suffice it to say that i enjoyed it very much. i do not read many songfics, but that is mainly because so many people tend to choose extremely popular songs for the lyrics, and i feel people should get more creative and seek out the lyrics of lesser known musicians... lyrics that actually mean something. anyway, aside from a few spots where some words ought to have been capitalized and a couple instances of odd punctuation, i could not find anything to negatively criticize about the flow and grammar of the fic. interesting creative choice in how Kagome returns to the Feudal Era... not sure if it really would work, but i have never seen that before in a fic, so i find it very not-cliche. i am very picky on what i read, and especially critical. so, feel good to know that i found your fic enjoyable. it was nominated for Best Songfic of Second Quarter 2004 for the Inuyasha FanGuild, and after reading it, i will be seconding the nomination. thanks. it was a worthwhile read ;) http://numisma.freewebsitehosting.com/2ndQuarter2004.html
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