| "Angels Crying" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Good
Reviewed By: Haibara3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 23:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm well the fic was nice and sweet, I liked the clothing you put on Ryou-chan^^ However I think if you are going to develop this fic you'll need to up the rating, The fic was good overall, However it's Moshi Moshi, not mushi mushi, Mushi is bug, insect or if used differently ignore^^
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: March 25, 2005 22:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Love the 'Tainted light' comment, can I borrow that? And that outfit suits Ryou so well I can just see it! I hope you update this soon so I can read the next scene with all the citrus! I don't think they even kissed in this chapter! Well you've probably already got the next chapter in mind *shoves a notebook in your brain* so type it up! And don't be lazy about Dark Legacy! Update them all! Muhahahmuhahah! Ahem please continue to write I love your style. Thank You. DK ;) P.S. I think I saw your review on Tales of Crimson Nights so you've already read it. But have you read 'Burning Sea' by hato_chiisa? Or 'Koibito Yami' by the same?
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Title: Goodie! ^~
Reviewed By: Kimistry On: May 19, 2004 18:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is so cool! ^^ I like Ryou/Bakura fanfics. They are just so cute. I
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 23:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was lovely. So kawaii. I'd love to see a lemon between them. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl (not logged in) On: April 24, 2004 18:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yay! A good story with my fave pairing always makes my day!
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Reviewed By: michew [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 17:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG this is sooooo good plz plz write another chapter i loooooooooooved this one!!! tee hee i loved Ryou's sexy outfit! :)
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Reviewed By: DarciaMoriko On: April 20, 2004 14:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good fict. I enjoyed reading it. BTW the song belongs to Swedish band called E-Type
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