| "In The Zone" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: LC On: June 07, 2004 11:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Request: Misao and Aoshi in the school basement. Request: Sano and Megumi at the clinic.
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Reviewed By: ......... On: May 05, 2004 17:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
The second chapter had better grammar, and didn't switch from first person to third like the first one. Both chapters were good (Aoshi got something in both too), and I do have a request: Tomoe and Akira in the library. Well, there aren't a lot of T/A fics out there...and well...personally, Akira deserves Tomoe while Kenshin deserves Kaoru.
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Reviewed By: Reviewer On: April 25, 2004 00:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wasn't as good as the first chapter but okay.
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Reviewed By: eien_ni_kawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2004 18:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
That's a really nice story, i wish that's how you meet someone nice in real life, oh and it was pretty hot too. Please continue!
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