| "'life' and 'death'" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sanura (not logged in) On: May 29, 2004 09:31 CDT
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ooh, great chapter, I'm totally loving the story. Please update soon, must read more....
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Title: perfect tens all around
Reviewed By: DaemonHuntress On: May 26, 2004 01:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is "wow." You take writing to a whole new level. I can't believe that more people haven't reviewed. Maybe your story is a well kept secret but pretty soon everyone will know about it! Okay, so I suck at analogies.. was that even an analogy?? Am I even spelling the word right? Now look, I've made a fool of myself. If you haven't figured it out yet I love the story and it is going onto my favorites list! Everything is so interesting and exciting, I love how things keep getting twisted around and how all the tension is building up. I can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE update soon!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2004 00:06 CDT
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OOO that was sooo funny.. lol can't wait till you update. this story just keeps on getting better. YAY! Miroku's here!! lol i wonder what will happen when they find Inu and kag in the jacuzzi? keep up the good work and updat asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: o0ShadowXFox0o [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 15:49 CDT
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I'm speechless...you've got a rare talent with words. I enjoyed reading you story very much. Couldn't stop. lol Anyway, hope you update soon. Can't wait to see what happens. MAy God bless you and good luck.
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Reviewed By: Sanura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 07:21 CDT
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great chapter, the story is really coming along. I'm loving it, please update soon, wanna read more.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 02:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there. that was a great chapter. Please keep up the great work and update asap. i love your story so far and i can't wait to find out what happens next, it's so intersting. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Sanura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 17:51 CDT
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Just read the entire story that you have written so far, and I just have to say, "wow, couldn't put it down," so to speak. I'm really enjoying it. I hope you update soon, it's really good.
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 04:59 CDT
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ooo so good. please update asap. can't wait to find out what happens next. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: shirahime. [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 23:34 CDT
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i'm surprised this fic doesn't have some more reviews to it! i'm loving the tension so far...kudos to a great start on this! it's been added to my faves list, & i can't wait for the next chap. ttfn
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Title: It's only me, the author, haha.
Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 22:23 CDT
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Okay, so I'm looking through the reviews because I think that they are fun to read. The name Krystal sounded really familiar so I decided to click on the user name to see if I could find anything out.. Turns out she's only author to several several stories that I really enjoy, haha. So thanks! I'm flattered that you like what I'm working on. The second thought that crossed my head is 'Shit, I hope that I've reviewed since she reviewed for me, it's only common courtesy.' Time to go check... *sneaks away* haha. Thanks again!
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is pretty cool so far. I really like the mob connecions etc that you have goingand how every one is connected so far, though dont kill me for askingbut where is Miroku? jus a though, anywhoo, i hope you update this great story soon!
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Reviewed By: Sango Pup [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I realllly like this story!It's awesome!I hope you update VERY soon!
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 01:01 CDT
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OOO this story is great so far. I love the way that you write. i hope to read more soon, so keep up the good work and update asap. Krystal.
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Reviewed By: Hanoi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it when peopple make Kagome kick butt! Too bad about her family though, I hope you update soon...Onegai!!!!!
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Reviewed By: eMeLyNoOoPeE [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 14:14 CDT
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i love it very interesting... that was definitly a first... and with inuyasha acting like that very different but hey your story. now with the same ol questions... will kikyou and naraku be taking part of this? and also the other characters? are sesshoumaru and inuyasha part of a mafia as well? hmm well i hope that you can continue... and i will be waiting... sige na
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