| "Apple of My Eye" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: AoS On: May 08, 2004 00:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::grin:: I luv this fic. I will admit, when I first saw the s/p pairing my mind went blank trying to figure THAT one out. :D But, you actually pulled it off pretty well. Keep it up, I look forward to more!... OH!! and by the way, I think (if I'm not mistaken) that Pegasus's eyes are brown.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 21:55 CDT
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Yay! Umm, a Solomon/Peggy lemon? Umm, alright. Don't worry, I'll still read it! ^-^ Wait. If they're (S/P) going to find the shirts with lipstick, why would there be a lemon? Guess I'll have to wait! Update soon! ^-^
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Reviewed By: Rikainiel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 15:00 CDT
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MORE, DAMMIT, MORE!! HURRY UP AND GIVE US SOME MORE!! lol
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 18:28 CDT
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NoooooOOOOOOOOoooooooooo! You can't break up Yami/Yugi and Bakura/Ryou! ;_; But they're getting back together right? RIGHT? Sorry, I've had a bit too much sugar. ;;;^_^ UPDATE SOON! Please. ^-^
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 21:20 CDT
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Starfish? Anyway, I love Malik and Marik in this chapter! ^-^ Awww, yami's so sweet! Okay, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rikainiel On: May 01, 2004 12:39 CDT
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Yeah, tomodachi, put the rest up, PUT THE REST UP!!!!! X0 I need to know what happens after the last chapter I read. *cries* Hurry!!! Please? *puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: Celia On: April 29, 2004 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sick and wrong. But hilarious. XD I was laughing out loud, heheheHAHAHAHA! But yeah, odd pairing.. ::twitch::
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 17:07 CDT
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Gee, I would have thought Yami wouldn't have accepted it either. Will the lovers (Y/Y and S/P) still be together? I have no clue! Please, update your story! ^-^
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Title: Oh My RA
Reviewed By: Dark Sanctuary [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My Ra, Pegasus and Solomon together, lol dont see that much ( I dont think ? lol) Anyways didnt expect Yugi to react like that, Hope everything turns out alright in the end. Cant wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 22:01 CDT
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Solomon/Pegasus... ummm ok then. I like it, except you're putting very bad images in my head.
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 17:53 CDT
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umm... all I can say I'm traumatized for life now... U_U but don't let that stop you! Solomon and Peggy... *shivers*
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Reviewed By: Rikainiel On: April 24, 2004 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah!! You must put this whole thing up again! I can't believe it was lost on ff.net again! X( This is a great fic though, tomodachi, so put it all up again, for my sake?! PLEASE?!
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Reviewed By: Med On: April 22, 2004 03:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Med:Lol, such a weird story! I keep reading just as long as it ain't going to get any more weirder between Solomon and Pegasus (hope i spelled that right)^.^ Yugi:and let the weirdness carry on Med:......
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