| "Apple of My Eye" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Title: Ya!
Reviewed By: ayames_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 03:42 CDT
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I'm getting angry! I love this story because it is one of the few Pegasus fics! UPDATE NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'm going with DemonandGoddess! I love Ryou but I'm getting bored! You will Pay dearly if you don't update!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Brandishing Cheesegrater
Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 23:05 CDT
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I'm bored...am looking at fav. author people...you have not updated...you have dipleased Internet gods everywhere...update this or something else you've written soon or Ryou gets it! *crazed psycho look in eye* Ryou: Save me! Me: oh I'm sorry Ryou! But I have to threaten to do bodily harm to you! or else God won't update! Ryou:Save me! *hikari/puppy eyes*
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Title: ^-^ * _* Smiles!!
Reviewed By: ayames_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 04:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update Now or I will have to kill you!!!!NOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know what you did last summer and I know where you live... Okay ^-^ update soon!!! By! oh and I don't know where you live I just wanted to scare you so you could update!!! UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! before I get angry! I'll give you alot of cookies and cand and milk and soad and lots and lots of happiness!!!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2004 00:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please update soon! something! Anything! What the ****ing **** is gonna happen? And what the **** is with these ****ing stars? **** censor people. Anyway, update soon! I'll give you cookies!
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Reviewed By: ayames_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Med On: May 23, 2004 02:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't updated for a while ! stupid computer needed to be fixed but this is turned out really good! keep writing! (i hope it turns out even better)
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 18:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh, did I put Yugi instead of Yami? *checks* Whoops, my bad. ^^ yay, we got a Kura/Ryou kiss! So happy. NEway, update soon!
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Title: umm update soon
Reviewed By: C0nfus3d/Samara/Chrysler On: May 22, 2004 14:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon pretty please ok?
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Reviewed By: Rowan Girl not logged in On: May 22, 2004 14:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay, all is better in my little world now that you have updated...
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Reviewed By: O.O (scared little girl) On: May 22, 2004 12:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
you do realized you uploaded the same chapter for both 8 and 9...
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Reviewed By: ayames_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. Please say you will write more Pegasus stories. This is a great story.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 22:24 CDT
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Poor Peggy and Solomon! Forbidden love, only at an older scale! Dude, Yugi did Kura! O_o And why is Peggy and Kura so stupid (or think Solomon is so old) that they think Solomons parents are still alive!!! Anyway, (you know what comes up next!) update soon! PS: Please put a Kura/Ryou lemony lemonish lemon? PPPPlllleeeeeeaaaaassssseee? Do I have to go Marik on you? j/k
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Reviewed By: AoS On: May 09, 2004 22:52 CDT
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Pretty lemon. *__* Yessssss, Pretty pretty round yellow lemon. ::grin:: Again, that was great. Very amusing, too. I laugh every time I think about what Yugi wore. ::snerk:: Though, my eye twitched a little when poor Ryou smooched Solomon. :D Hmmmm, a few misspelled words here and there... but other than that it was awesome!! Can't wait for the next one!!
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Reviewed By: O.O (scared little girl) On: May 09, 2004 18:58 CDT
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yeah, that was just strange... *traumatized*
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess(not logged in) On: May 09, 2004 16:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOooh, I see now! The S/P lemon wasn't that bad actually. I just substituted a few words in my head. HAHa, I would pay to see Bakura's reaction to Ryou french kissing Solomon! Keep updating, kay?
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