Title: Ahhh!!!
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 17:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I'm the first to review! Yay to Wrennie! hehe, so, well, i thought i would review this because you haven't gotten a public review of anything by me for a long time, so here goes! First off, i would just like to say that Farfarello has issues, and say nothing more on that matter. As for characterization, I've seen very few episodes of the show, much to my dismay, and those were in Japanese, but I really like what you did with the characters! Although Yohji wasn't too much of a perv, his comments to Birman are adorable, and when he was refering to Aya as Ran's "wife", well, that was just too funny! I love how Aya started to open up some, with out becoming to out of character. Omi and Ken, being side chars were still well done and added to the atmosphere of the story. I'd also like to say that I'm kinda glad you didn't make lenomade from this story, it made it seem more like the reader is just getting to peek in on the chars lives, without seeing to muc h about hte secretive characters. The story itself was wonderful, well thought out and fun to read with just the right amount of romance, action, and angst to balance it all out, and lets not forget the wry humor! As usual, another great sory, and the songs? Not so bad! I'd kinda like to put them to music to find out what they should sound like, but I'm not a composser, so I'll just have to settle for the voices in my head. There's enough of them to make a pretty good choir! hehe What I also like is how you addressed the fact that Aya has no fashion sense! REDHEADS DON'T LOOK GOOD IN ORANGE! That was cute and I can't deny that I prolly would have opened my mouth about it too! Ok, well, I don't know how long this is getting, but seeing as I have my own projects to get to, and another raid of your site to begin, I really gotta stop! Hope I don't scare anyone away! I'm not deranged. Really! ^_~
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