| "Guilty Pleasures" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2004 02:18 CDT
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Yayyy!! You wrote more! Thanks heaps, I enjoyed this a story a lot...They do live happily ever after though...you just haven't written it yet! Promise! (Sorry. I'm just a hopeless romantic at heart!) Thanks again. It's good!^^
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Smut [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this is one hell of a story. I can't get enough of this AyaxSchuxYohji action. This has to be my first time setting foot into this fandom and I'm loving it already.
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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 03:50 CDT
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Great! I enjoyed this a lot. I really like Schu when he's playing nicely; really, really like; you don't need to be a telepath to guess that it's obviously going to be very...well...you know. And you've pulled it off believably in canon. I have to confess that I found the use of the present tense a bit confronting to start with, (please don't hit me! I got over it!) but you sustain it really well and once I got into it I really enjoyed your fic. It was nice to see Aya with a sense of humour for once. I hope that we will get to see a lot more of Schu and Aya interacting before the ending, 'cause they're very sweet together. Great work. Can't wait for more.^^
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Reviewed By: Cyfris [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 20:23 CDT
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UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!! just thought i'd get that out of the way ^____^ really good story, please...uh, well, it'd get redundent if i said it again.
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Reviewed By: Blue-eyed Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! Finish soon!!!! I'm dying to know wats gona happen nxt!!!
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Reviewed By: Black Kittens Dream [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 07:07 CDT
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I'm still highly amused about babelfish's translation, because Farfie's hidden message looks even crazier than it already is. =^_^= Ah, a threesome would be perfect, and I hope that the next chapter will be out soon. Love it, great story. Black Kitten
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Reviewed By: melaniesoong [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 16:24 CDT
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Waaah, I absolutely love you for this story!! Write more soon, you can't just leave Yohji all alone while Aya and Schu fuck like bunnies! XD I simply love the way you write, you do smut so well ^_~ Lucky me just found your hp, too, so I can read the rest of your fics. How about writing some Saiyuki fics? Or maybe you have already, hhm, I'll have to go and check...
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Reviewed By: Black Kitten's Dream [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 08:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh! You're still there! That's great. I read this fic on ff.net and I loved it! No surprise, it's my favourite pairing after all. I just checked your hp and found that the story's still only 7 chapters long. Why? Please, don't abandon it. *puppy eyes* If you ever update with chapter 8, I will... hm... make you a honorary member of the "Save SchuxAyaxSchu" fan club. Not that it really exist... but it's a nice thought, ne? =^_~= Black Kitten
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