| "Strings" Reviews/Comments [ 84 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Mukando [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 10:18 CDT
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hah! i reviewed every chapter!!... i think... O.o
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Mukando [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 10:17 CDT
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YAY! KURAMA PLUSHIE! that's on my wish list of things ill prolly never get! ^_^ yes, i hav heard the ketchup song. some ppl at my school did a dance to it... ^_^ ANYoro, NICE FIC! update soon, it left me...like this O_O on edge of seat. unable to leave. yea. it's DAT good. lol. could you maybe check out mine and give some advice?! i would appreciate it! >< oh yea... the standard.. UPDATE SOOOOOOOON!
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Mukando [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 09:20 CDT
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hah! i knew it! i went forward in tiem! im shooo smart! hiei: didnt it say something like that in the summary? saph:>< are you saying im not smart?! hiei: yes. saph: >< shut up. also, dear author, if i annoy you with my random... thigns, just tell me to lay off the reviewing, and i will obey your wish... *bows*
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Mukando [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 09:05 CDT
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ah, roses *drowns in roses* ^_^ kurama: she died smiling.... saph(me): anyways, im guessing marionette is a puppet, cause all these chapter titles are like puppet thingies... invisible strings, sitting on a shelf... hyup. you're one smart person. unlike me. MY CYOA SUCKS!! >
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Mukando [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 09:01 CDT
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IT WAS A GHOST!! >
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Mukando [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 08:54 CDT
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dude, you'er some kickass author, ya know that, right?! >< and if no one has ever told you that, then i dont know whats wrong with people! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Mukando [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 08:51 CDT
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dude, you hav nice titles.. but i still dunno what a marionette is...
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Reviewed By: Tenshi no Mukando [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 08:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O holy sh*t! that was...that was... i can't even find words to describe it. of all the cyoas i've ever ead (and believe me, that's like...hundreds...) this has to be the most well-written i hav ever seen. but i won't say anything about the plot, since i dun know what it is. im still on frist chappie. ^^; anyways, taht was a really nice first chappie! so dark... so cynical. *sighs* I LOVE IT! GO YOU! ^__^
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Reviewed By: Archeress Of Apollo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 23:38 CDT
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haha and i'm in your author's note *grins and begins singing the milk and cereal song again*
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Reviewed By: Archeress Of Apollo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 23:33 CDT
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i think of them all, this is my favorite chapter so far. it has struck me the most, even with the ending of the one before it (which i loved, evil cliffie that it was). the descriptions were ... awesome and just everything... the emotion, just the very aura of the chapter... *sighs* i could only ever hope to acheive something so grand *bows down to it* i love this chapter.
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Reviewed By: Lone Sakura (lazy to log in) On: June 29, 2004 23:27 CDT
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Uh.. still not sure about the pairing yet.. you said it is Hiei or Kurama. So far, it sounds like its Hiei..
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Reviewed By: Archeress Of Apollo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 23:23 CDT
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i hope i haven't reviewed chapter six already *looks about nervously* i can't seem to remember and i'm too lazy to check *grins sheepishly* --- evil cliffie! *grabs you by the collar and shakes you* although... i can't demand anymore since chapter seven's up and i'm going to read it as soon as this review gets posted... ^_^;
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Reviewed By: Starzie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay, an update! I've been waiting! ^-^ I can't wait for next chappie!
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Reviewed By: InLoveWithHiei [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 21:00 CDT
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*screams and beats Ametank with her shovel* MAKE IT LONGER! LONGER I SAY! DO YOU HEAR ME!
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Reviewed By: MissyLeigh On: June 24, 2004 20:39 CDT
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I really like this story. It's one of the most original and interesting stories I've read in a while. And you tell the story very well. I'm looking forward to what you write next.
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