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"Lust, Longing, and a Videotape" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ]
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 Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Miser Meaku  On: July 12, 2004 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMFG!!!!!!!! That was the best SetoxYami story EVER! I could so see that happen! (No mushy bullshit!) I hope you write more, like that hinted YugixRyou... ^_~
 Reviewed By: Watson4  On: June 21, 2004 12:31 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. Lol. This is exactly how sex between the two of them would be. No mushy crap, but with them cussing each other out in the process. Very realistic. Keep up the good work!
 Reviewed By: seto lover  On: June 17, 2004 18:49 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved this fan fic, I really did.useally when I read fan fics I don't get HORNY, but darm this one took the cake.I really hope you write more fan fics like this.^.^
 Reviewed By: YxY luver  On: May 24, 2004 00:17 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is so great!!! I just love this story!! You should really consider writing more....maybe a fic on Yami x Yugi (my fav pairing) or you could write the next part to it, a Ryou x Yugi lemon ^-^ I hope you write more soon!! Be safe
 Title: You'll Be Receiving One Soon....
Reviewed By: jhoney [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 20, 2004 17:56 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very naughty! LOL ^_^ Well for you to have never written anything as such you did a damned good job of it and keep an eye on your email because you may be receiving something from me soon regarding your story here ^_~*
 Reviewed By: anubiset  On: May 18, 2004 19:49 EDT
Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD! That was amazing. Thank you.
 Title: speechless!
Reviewed By: J Honey  On: May 13, 2004 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Whoo my god I didn't think ANYONE could cuss that much while getting their brains fucked but I guess it depends on the person. Whoo and I thought your other story was hot. This makes it look TAME! Woot! Write more!
 Reviewed By: Zakthebakahentai  On: May 07, 2004 05:20 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*needs a Antarctic cold shower* 'nuff said
 Title: AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
Reviewed By: Yami'sLover(dragonrider00 just not signed in)  On: April 29, 2004 19:25 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I CANT BELIEVE YOU WERE EVEN ABLE TO THINK OF A MASTERPIECE LIKE THAT!!! AAHHH I LOVED IT U ARE APURE GENIUS!!! I LOVE IT SO MUCH IT WAS SOOO HOT! I LOVE YAMI AD SETO TOGETHER BUT DAMN! PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE MAYBE A YUGIxYAMI ONE! THERE ARE MY FAV. OPAIRING AND I BET YOU COULD DO SOMETHING INTERESTING WITH THE TWO! ^^ MUCH LOVE Dragonrider00 KEEP UP THE AWSOME WORK!
 Reviewed By: Loofa  On: April 28, 2004 19:34 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. And I mean wow. This is an Awesome story. It's one of the better descriptions I ever read, not to mention probably the longest. And hell, it was good all the way through. I'm kinda of neutral when it comes to the pair, but even so, it was a great fic, and I'm glad I stumbled upon it.
 Reviewed By: Kitsune Kawaii [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 25, 2004 23:13 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your writing is wonderful,and well detailed.I enjoyed very much.I hope to read more of you work!!
 Reviewed By: evilmistymisto  On: April 25, 2004 11:25 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
O_O that was the longest description i have ever read. Just perfect! Have been looking to read something like that for long ^_^ *omg ...I'm an another perv* *who cares this was priceless*
 Title: LilMizTake63@aol.com
Reviewed By: Debs xxx  On: April 24, 2004 06:52 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hehehe totally awesome!!! Love Seto/Yami pairigs and this one was one of the best ive read!! Seriously, it was excellent!! Well done! This was a great story!! Lotsa Luv Debs xxx
 Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 23, 2004 20:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wow...that was really good.
 Title: YamiTrixie
Reviewed By: akurochiaki [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 23, 2004 13:33 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was great!
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