| "Lust, Longing, and a Videotape" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: SerenaJ On: October 11, 2014 18:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Clever, sexy, funny, and smart. Works for me!
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Title: Strange
Reviewed By: Lil goth Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 21:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd have to say that was a very strange story....good, but strange...:P
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Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2005 15:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*bows down* I'M NOT WORHTY! I'M NOT WORTHY! I'M NOT WORTHY!! AMAZING! God that is just want I needed.......Wonderful! Please keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: Miser Meaku On: September 12, 2004 02:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*______* OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was the BEST YamixSeto fanfic EVER!!!!!!!! *Still drooling uncontrolably* Yes. This definently one for the record books! Keep up the fantastically orgasmic work!!! &^_^&
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Reviewed By: rayven2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 22:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! Best Yami/Seto fiction ive read!
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 10:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing. I liked how you had enough of a plot for it to make sense. It's a little hard to think of Yami submissive, but it's an extremely erotic idea...Seto's always on top, but you made him less of a jerk and totally realistic. Could you write a part 2? ^-^
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Reviewed By: ME On: August 05, 2004 04:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. That was awesome!!! I don't usually like yaoi unless I'm in the mood and I only liked two couples before now. But because of this story I think Yami/Seto is one of my favorite couples now. You have to write more because you can't write something like that and not write another story with them.
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Reviewed By: Mel Meiko On: July 28, 2004 06:27 EDT
Comment/Review:
OOC-ness, but their rivalry is still present. Great usage of descriptions and synonyms.
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Title: O.O
Reviewed By: Miser Meaku On: July 12, 2004 16:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG!!!!!!!! That was the best SetoxYami story EVER! I could so see that happen! (No mushy bullshit!) I hope you write more, like that hinted YugixRyou... ^_~
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Reviewed By: Watson4 On: June 21, 2004 12:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Lol. This is exactly how sex between the two of them would be. No mushy crap, but with them cussing each other out in the process. Very realistic. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: seto lover On: June 17, 2004 18:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fan fic, I really did.useally when I read fan fics I don't get HORNY, but darm this one took the cake.I really hope you write more fan fics like this.^.^
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Reviewed By: YxY luver On: May 24, 2004 00:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so great!!! I just love this story!! You should really consider writing more....maybe a fic on Yami x Yugi (my fav pairing) or you could write the next part to it, a Ryou x Yugi lemon ^-^ I hope you write more soon!! Be safe
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Title: You'll Be Receiving One Soon....
Reviewed By: jhoney [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 17:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very naughty! LOL ^_^ Well for you to have never written anything as such you did a damned good job of it and keep an eye on your email because you may be receiving something from me soon regarding your story here ^_~*
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Reviewed By: anubiset On: May 18, 2004 19:49 EDT
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OH MY GOD! That was amazing. Thank you.
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Title: speechless!
Reviewed By: J Honey On: May 13, 2004 19:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo my god I didn't think ANYONE could cuss that much while getting their brains fucked but I guess it depends on the person. Whoo and I thought your other story was hot. This makes it look TAME! Woot! Write more!
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