| "Dragonlords: Return of Inuyasha Takasuio" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_kitsune_tears (not logged in) On: July 15, 2004 21:37 CDT
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Update soon!!! i totally luv this story!!!!!^__~ so PLZ update!
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Reviewed By: Saccharine-Ish (not logged on) On: July 05, 2004 10:08 CDT
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This is a great idea for a fanfic. Really like the whole dragon angle thing. However, you have too many characters that arent in Inuyasha and it gets really confusing as to who is who. You should try to concentrate more so on them (kag, inu, etc) than the others.
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Reviewed By: AlixMM On: June 20, 2004 22:30 CDT
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this story sounds very interesting but I keep seeing that it was revised and nothing is different what is going on? Please update with something new. I want to know what happens
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Reviewed By: o0ShadowXFox0o [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2004 10:34 CDT
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I'm speechless. I'm awestruck. I can't quite say how I feel right now. You've got loads of talent. lol I can't wait to see what happens to Kagome. I'm giddy allready. lol Anyway, hope you update soon. Good luck and may God bless you in your future excursions.
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Title: Write more!
Reviewed By: k_immortal On: May 14, 2004 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The idea of these "Dragonlords" sound quite exciting, seeing as how there hasn't been a fanfiction concerning them yet. However, when beginning a new story, you should really try to update as much as you can to capture the reader's interest. I gave you an 8 on the Enjoyment Factor because nothing dramatic has happened yet. I would like to see more. Battle scenes, love turmoil, mysterious happenings, etc. When is the famous Inuyasha going to appear? Isn't he the star of the show? Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Mousy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 13:19 CDT
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Not a bad story so far, it seems like you are weaving the two tales together pretty good, and it seems that you have put a lot of thought into this story, I can't wait to see how it turns out. Maybe I can help with your name promble, I don't know if you want a Japaness name nor not, if you do then I'm not going to be much help but here are a few ideas: Eli (short for Elizabeth) Luthy, Rose RoLand, Skylar Ray, Mika Kane. Pick and chose or discard I don't care. Waiting on the next chapter, until then, later.
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Reviewed By: lolololol On: April 26, 2004 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
rly good! keep writing
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