| "The Book" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: shinineko1@gmail.com
Reviewed By: ShiniNeko On: March 02, 2005 20:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, Aya does live at the same house, but I have to say, I DO like hte idea, but... I would have preferred a chapter fic to be honest. Not because I like clicking or anything, but because to have them resolve it so quickly and have Ha'ri say he loves him is... a bit fast, cliche even.
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Reviewed By: Dark_Divinity [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 19:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I enjoyed it greatly. K, bye. ^_%
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Reviewed By: segaanime [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 05:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! I love this fic! ^____^ Best Hari/Aya fic ever! Great job!
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