| "The Pursuit of Pleasure" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 08:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the email at the end was hilarious. in fact, the whole thing was! i cracked up laughing with every chapter... lol, *has tears streaming down face* ~clusterlizard1
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh, this was hilarious. I almost sprayed my lunch over the keyboard trying to control myself. Nice job.
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Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2006 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DDDDDAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNN! You had me laughing for a long time! Please write another one I look forward to it!
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Reviewed By: B.o. On: February 27, 2006 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DDDDDAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNN! You had me laughing for a long time! Please write another one I look forward to it!
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Title: Where's the spice?
Reviewed By: MignonneLiEng On: May 16, 2005 17:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an awesome fanfic! It got hot, but you kept the suspense. But I have to say I was rather dissappointed at the end. I can't believe you ended it like that! At least let it go out with a bang and some 'skit skit skit'. I suggest you put it in detail as Aeris & Sephy finally do the 'do'. I liked it though, keep writing!
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Reviewed By: razile [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 05:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are one sick man, and a bloody funny one at that. top marks
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Reviewed By: Woodstock On: July 20, 2004 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. By the way, I think the doujinshi you're looking for is called "Dynamite Passion". There are scans of it on yaoishrine.com, but I haven't been able to find a hard copy of it (pun completely intended). Hope this helps!
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Reviewed By: Schwarz tot schwarz das bloot [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2004 17:33 CDT
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Dude, that was just scary! I mean, poor Sephiroth! You said Cloud bashing! Not Sephiroth torture! Anyway, hell funny fic, mate! You gotta continue! I am dying to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Schuldich22 On: July 14, 2004 12:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahahaha!!! I love this! Who knew old ladies could be like that?! Please continue the story. I need more! *runs away with sephiroth* but he's mine...mwahahaha *get's hit by all the other sephi fans* ow!
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Title: HAHAHA!!
Reviewed By: chibichibikawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was mad funny!!! I laughed through the whole thing!! I always knew Rude and Reno were gay ~_^ Write more please!
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Reviewed By: Artemis_Murasame On: June 20, 2004 21:13 CDT
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OMG! This is hilarious! The old ladies were a good touch as well. You definitely need to write more. I just gotta see if Seph really drops them.
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Reviewed By: Katiroth On: June 15, 2004 01:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
..Oooh...my...goodness. That's just..completely..I'm nearly in tears from laughing-- and trying to hold in my laughter so I don't wake up my housemates. Excellent.
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Reviewed By: Yaioboy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 09:48 CDT
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come on!write more pease! I want to see what the old lady's do and how mad aries is gonna be.
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Reviewed By: animekittysama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had me giggling the whole time! The old ladies are the best part because I know that if I were an old lady and saw a guy like Sephiroth in a pharmacy, I would want to mess with him too.
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Title: I'm laughing to the point that it's killing me!
Reviewed By: AmyAnderson45 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not only are you good with drama, but you're not that bad with comedy as well. This is extremely a different perspective on the desperado known as Sephiroth! He's so comical and what's up with Aeris...why is she so...um evil and you know? Anyway, keep this up! Your fans are rooting for you to write more!
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Reviewed By: NoodlePower365 On: April 24, 2004 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One word. Hilarious!
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