| "Alternate Universe" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
Title: Oh my god....
Reviewed By: Tygra's Wife Oracle [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2013 14:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my worst nightmare. I can't believe this is still up.... Agh! |
Title: I'd love to join!
Reviewed By: FKB On: September 30, 2004 19:32 EDT
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Name:Kitty Gender: Female Age:14 Bio: An ordinary girl who loves video games and anime. Also a bit obsessed with bishounen ^^0 Powers: a healer and can control the element of water in some cases. Outfit: blue tanktop, blue jeans, and black boots. Hair and eyes: short blonde hair (often confused for a boy from behind XD) and blue eyes. Weapon: Hammer (lol who knows the fun I could have with that! XD) Personality: bright and cheerful in most cases, but also has a sensitive side. Pairing: LOCKE COLE PLEASE!!!!!*puppy dog eyes*
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Reviewed By: Sakuragirl 01(n.l.i.) On: July 06, 2004 23:49 EDT
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I forget song:Everywhere
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Reviewed By: Sakura girl 01 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2004 19:36 EDT
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I forgot Song: Sk8er Boi
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Reviewed By: Sakura girl 01 ( not loged on) On: June 28, 2004 14:32 EDT
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I tink this is late but here Name:Hikari Sakura Gender:Female Age:17 Bio:outcast a Rurouni not alot is Konw about her. Powers:you can pick Outfit:blue kimono with birds Hair and eyes:back red paired up with:Soujiro seta
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Title: Forgot something
Reviewed By: Jacquelyn On: June 20, 2004 16:09 EDT
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I forgot something. Outfit:a white tank top that says"bootylicous" in pink letters,tight blue jeans and gold high heel sandals Hair and eyes:long, waist length black hair with golden brown highlights and beautiful blue-green eyes.
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Title: I want in
Reviewed By: Jacquelyn On: June 20, 2004 16:00 EDT
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Can I be in your story? Name:Jacquelyn Gender:Female Age:16 Bio:is born with supernatural powers and is a orphan when her parents died. Powers:psychic powers(see the future and the events before it happens) Personality:Is a sweet person and never gives up. Loves to shop,party, and wear makeup. Weapons: two deadly sais,steel fans(i.e. Kitana in Mortal Kombat Deadly Alliance) and a samurai sword Song:Naughty Girl by Beyonce and Yeah by Usher Pairing:CAN I PLEASE HAVE YAMI!! MUST HAVE YAMI!!!
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Reviewed By: KaoriLindsayBlack [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 00:45 EDT
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can i be in 2...plez. CleoGender:female Age:18 Bio: orphan loves tombraider bakura Powers: darkness demon Outfit:black ufo pants black t-shirt Hair and eyes: silver hair gold highlights dark blue almost black eyes
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Reviewed By: Summing Princess Abigail [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2004 20:30 EDT
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Can I please be in your story? Here is my character. Name:Princess Abigail til Alexandros 18th, but everyone calls her Abigail Alexandros cause she hates the fact she is a princess Gender: Female Age: 16 Bio: History/Origin: she has two older brothers and an older twin sis by ten hours and they all died in an attack on her home and it is being rebuild. She is to rule but left because of the memories bought to her. She has nightmares about what happened in her dreams; her brothers and sister blames her for their deaths other then that nothing is know about her, she is a mystery waiting to be solved. Powers: heals, summons, miko powers, power over all the elements, and power over light and dark Personality Happy-go-lucky, nice, kind to all, cares about others before herself, very polite, does not care what race you are, and very shy, but loves to sing to people and is mostly quiet and keeps to herself Weapons: two handguns, staff, two daggers, fists, bow and arrows, and pet dog name Angelo and pet cat demon like Sango's name Meccy that is a fire/water/light cat demon that has red eyes and silver strippes were Kirara has black Song: breath no more and where will you go Paired up with: PLEASE CAN I HAVE SAI SAICI OR KENSHIN?! Please email me at abigailme2001@yahoo.com if I make it. Update soon OK?
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Title: Umm, Hi again
Reviewed By: Lena 17 On: June 15, 2004 14:06 EDT
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Okay, as I intended to right in my first review...(stupid enter button)..I really like the fic!!! I hope that you update very soon!! I really want to see the next chapter!!!
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Title: Hiya
Reviewed By: Lena17 On: June 15, 2004 14:05 EDT
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Reviewed By: Lena17((Hikaru1617, just to lazy to log in)) On: June 15, 2004 14:05 EDT
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Title: THANKING YOU!!!
Reviewed By: Moonlight_Icey [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 19:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!! You really made my day!! ^-^ I'm soooo happy...... Thanking you soooooooo much. *Hugs author* tee hee, i know i get carried away.....but thanks again!!! Update soon!!
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Title: On chapter 7
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 15:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's okay^_^ It's a very nice start^_^
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Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2004 23:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're welcome^_^ Glad to be of service^_^ And it's nice to see you updating this fic^_^
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Title: Keep it up!! ^o^
Reviewed By: Moonlight_Icey [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 04:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great update soon ok? Can't wait till you do!! Keep up the good story!!!
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Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 22:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's okay^_^ You did a good job on this chapter.
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Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 19:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's okay. I think it's fine the way it is^_^ Thank you for the kissing scene. How about in later chapters, Melody deems all of Ranma's fiancees unworthy for him and helps him get his revenge on all of them.
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Title: No problem
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 23:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No problem~_^ Thank you for using my story as an aide for your story^_^
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 23:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do enjoyed it^_^ I love the way you introduced Melody into your fic^_^ Thank you for the oppurtunity^_^
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Title: You're welcome
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 15:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No problem, always glad to help^_^ (shameless self-promotion)And if you like you can see Melody in my Ranma fic, "Music" here under my pen name "Mar" Good luck, Mari
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