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"Hentai out takes" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ]
 Title: Hmm...
Reviewed By: Chayumi [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 05, 2007 15:49 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was quite funny..... I liked when Sakura said "What.. Thats it?..." That made me laugh so hard i almost Pee'd in my pants...
 Reviewed By: BoNkErSfOrSeSsH [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 24, 2007 20:20 CST
Comment/Review:
EWWWWWW!!!!! that was gross, funny? yes but still gross lol (ch 3)
 Reviewed By: Kagome_the_Yorkie [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 19, 2006 14:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Y-you...you hentai! Where are my sacred arrows? WHERE?
 Reviewed By: redevil820 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 11, 2005 21:36 CST
Comment/Review:
lol, so funny xD
 Reviewed By: blade341 [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 08, 2005 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
lo fucking l god damn lol good job
 Title: ....... funny as hell
Reviewed By: ~sango_miroku13~  On: July 05, 2005 23:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Those were funny (and sexy) as hell. The last one was a little creepy though. But I still laughed. I esp. liked " That's it?" (the second chapter)
 Reviewed By: L.A.  On: February 21, 2005 20:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, damn... that's sorta sick, lol. Funny at the same time, though. But, I believe she would have screamed quite loudly... L.A.
 Title: lol
Reviewed By: Inuyasha is a total hotty [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 10, 2005 08:27 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
that was sooo freak'n funny
 Reviewed By: mysticinca  On: October 11, 2004 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
1st chapter: (giggles) Too true! 2nd chapter: (falls out of chair) THAT was evil! bwahaha! 3rd chapter: (can't stop laughing) *cough, hack...ewww hair ball* Funny, funny!
 Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 27, 2004 01:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG THAT WAS SOOOO FUNNY!!! please write more!
 Reviewed By: N. Traupy  On: July 15, 2004 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10
Comment/Review:
Pretty lame.
 Title: Mostly Brainless
Reviewed By: Stizzo [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 09, 2004 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
But well done. Good for a few laughs, at least. Nice work.
 Reviewed By: Mcfly (Brittany)  On: July 06, 2004 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You know its like, the hottest thing EVA. I love it! 10 for everything!!!
 Reviewed By: lil miss crazy  On: June 21, 2004 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
oh how sad! hahahaha! poor sasuke! hahaha! omg! i can't stop laughing! they'e both very funny! hahaha!
 Reviewed By: domozhirova221 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 06, 2004 13:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMFG! LMFAO! THAT was hilariously funny...and poor Sasuke. LoL Keep up the fics! *walks down the street while continuing to laugh* hee heee heeeeeeeeee
 Reviewed By: sharinganuser101  On: May 18, 2004 19:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwww....poor sasuke. no wonder he's always angry! HAHAHAHAAHHAHA!
 Reviewed By: sharinganuser101  On: May 18, 2004 19:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
ROFLMAOPIMP (rolling on floor laughing peeing in my pants) that was hillarious! HAHAHHA! i can't stop laughing!
 Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 16, 2004 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
THAT IS THE FUNNIEST THING I EVER READ!
 Reviewed By: LQ  On: May 10, 2004 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Okay, I am a big time yaoist, but these were just too bloody funny to pass up. Not only that, but they were well written too! "You mean that's it?" Brilliant my dear, absolutley brilliant.
 Reviewed By: yami_neko  On: May 04, 2004 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
heh heh heh that's the best one i've ever read with sakura in it.
 Title: Gawd damn
Reviewed By: Naptune  On: April 30, 2004 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
I gave you all 1s cuz there wasn't a number 20 for the ratings. *snikcers* Come to me for more ideas ya? And write more when you get bored ya? Thanks for giving Sasuke a small dick. He is a big dick already. And lemme tell ya, Inuyasha can't be hung llike a bull. Oh one more thing. "wrong hole" haha I heard that ish from Don't Be a Menice(sp?) to Society.
 Title: omfg
Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 28, 2004 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHA!!those were so damn funny!! oh i love that. {::wipes tear from eyes::} ah, keep writing as you do.
 Reviewed By: Anime-Devil [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 26, 2004 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This Devil likes that. LMAO!!! PROOF THAT SASUKE IS ALL TALK!
 Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 26, 2004 01:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
LMFAO. Nice job!
 Reviewed By: Keiko_chan  On: April 25, 2004 20:43 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG this is sooooooo funny, i hope you write more really soon!!!!!!
 Title: That is raw...
Reviewed By: Ky Kiske  On: April 24, 2004 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Sasuke should atleast lay some good pipe...Inuyasha better not sniff himself after that jont...Kagome should have taken control...and Sakura naughty naughty girl. This was a kinky yet funny read...I want more.

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