Title: review
Reviewed By: Yui_alex On: September 11, 2005 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
the reason to why you got a five on the orginality is bacause I can feel what the rest will be. girl hate boy- boy want girl to like him, girl faling for him, girl - boy= together. not that I mind it like this, actually I think storys like this are the best, but the question was if it was orginal, and I do believe its not. but I like it that way, as long as nobody die in the end, I hate it when that happens. as you might understand your writing is a lot better than mine, but since I read a lot I can not give you the best grading, but I believe you should be heppy with what you got sinc they're all over medium. I see that its a long time since you wrote the two first chapters, but I hope you will write more. no pressure but if you do I'll read it (^_^)/
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