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Reviewed By: lady_kail On: April 01, 2005 04:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow! This is quite different from other Furaba fics that I've read. It so engrossing! I read all the chapters so far in one sittiing. I can't wait for you to finish the fic off. Please update as aften as you can. PLEASE!!!!
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Reviewed By: ?? On: March 31, 2005 09:44 CST
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Is there something wrong with the posting? chapters 1 and 13 are missing!
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Reviewed By: eponine-in-training On: February 19, 2005 00:44 CST
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after him. They mention that Kagura has seen it before, and Yuki has this one-liner thought: 'I never knew...' but it's pretty much much all Kyo angst and Tohru. The version 'Revelations' is based off of obviously has Yuki going with Tohru to retrieve Kyo. I have also always wanted there to be a Yuki/Kyo frienship fic..anything I've seen before this they either hate each other or make out all over the place. Ick. I don't mind a well crafted shonen-ai, but really. Writing something just for the sake of seeing two boys having sexual relations with no character development or anything is just ridiculous. Anyway, you are an amazing author, and, as you can see, it took me two review boxes to fit my ramblings, which is actually good, because I only ever ramble on about a story if it's excellent. To quote Kenshin, "Thank you...and Sayonara."
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Reviewed By: eponine-in-training On: February 19, 2005 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is REALLY good. I love the whole Kyo/Yuki Platonic love - thing, and it's actually supported in canon, now that I think about it. The fact that I actually HAVE to think about it, for it to be drawn to my attention, and then it's so obvious, just further supports it. It's something that one would just sort of overlook, all these little details; Kyo being all affected yet doing nothing after Yuki's asthma attack in volume 3, that whole "I hate Yuki, and I LIKE hating him"..."You speak as though you're OBLIGATED to hate him...your eyes tell me that you're afraid to find out"...'It's as though the act of hating is a way of protecting something' - deal, the observations about how scared Kyo was as he firmly insisted that he hated Yuki, as he ran and/or tried to avoid/deter people from inquiring about it... He dwelled on that whole 'Yuki's lying motionless and helpless on the ground and I can't go to him or anything no matter what, I have to remain impassive but I can't help imagining a pool of blood surrounding him and being all terrified and running off before anyone even starts to think I care or anything' thing for a long time too...and Hana's comment on it..'He's in chaos.' ...I mean, wow. I can't believe I never really noticed..but then, that's part of the whole thing you're pushing here, right? People DON'T notice. It's amazing. I was a bit confused about some of the references to the 'true form' thing, but that's probably because in the manga only Tohru goes after him. |
Reviewed By: JaguarKitty On: January 19, 2005 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ai! Please tell me that you're going to write more to this...and soon. *twitches* It's got such a wonderful plotline to it. I've never seen one like this before. In addition to the wonderful Kyou-centricness, you've got the One True Pairing of Furuba with Kyou/Tohru. Screw Yuki. Tohru goes with Kyou and no one else. (Actually, I think in the manga, it's being set up so that Yuki falls for someone named Machi..or something like that.) You MUST update soon. My sanity depends on it.
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Reviewed By: shadowcat15 On: August 02, 2004 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first time that I've rated a story on Mediaminer.org. I really have no idea what to say. I really liked your story. I rated it all tens except for originality/creativity. That I gave you a nine, because the whole 'trying to break the curse' thing isn't exactly new. But I did like your version of past events. My little brother kicked me off of the computer, and for his hour on the computer, I watched FB, and I could actually see a possibility that all of that had happened. Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: Kage Ohkami [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! this story was soo sad!! i was so close to crying at so many parts!! -takes deep breath- what was really awesome was the way you dove into each charachter's emotions and thoughts. ((it rocked my socks, lmao)) i love the way you made Kyo-kun show his emotions and talk with Yuki. ....AAAWWW!!! POOR POOR KYO-KUN GOING TO A NEKO HOUSE! ;_;!! how SAD! ok...im cool..-breathe in...breathe out...- ....i REALLY REALLY REALLY loved your story! PLEASE keep writing! for my sake? haha! ~LaTeR ^_^ Kage Ohkami
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Reviewed By: sapphire1 On: July 04, 2004 06:56 CDT
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this is so sad - want more -soon please
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Reviewed By: Ryoan (to lazy to go through the hassle) On: July 03, 2004 17:02 CDT
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I really liked your observation in your author notes about Tor. and Kyo. I think that they belong together too more than her with Yuki. The main part of her life was about the cat. What I have read I've liked, except maybe how she's refers to their name when directly speaking to them and herself. Don't take that as a bad thing, I really liked what you've written.. what I've read... so far. I would like to see Tor. and Kyo be together, but that's just my desire.
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Reviewed By: Schan On: May 12, 2004 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the characterizations in this. It's true actually when you think about it, how can Kyou beat Black Haru, when Yuki can't beat Haru in a fight? And yet Yuki can beat Kyou all the time? I happen to love Yuki/Kyou yaoi fics. But this is a great friendship fic. Just the same. If Tohru's gonna get with either Kyou or Yuki, they'd better find a way to stop the curse from taking effect every time she hugs them. Or there'd be no way for them to carry on a relationship, have kids ect. So far I believe the only females that have been married to the Sohma's have been distant Sohma cousins. Females outside the Sohma family can't seem to get around the curse.
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Reviewed By: Stephanie B. On: May 12, 2004 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to know, shat has he done????!!!! Please update soon. I can't wait until the next chapter.
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Title: sakayora
Reviewed By: sakayora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 16:49 CDT
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wonderful story! i feel bad for kyo tho... i hope and yuki will be ok. i hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: sapphire1 On: May 03, 2004 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes what has he done??????? questions questions - answers please - more soon i hope
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Reviewed By: sapphire1 On: April 29, 2004 13:41 CDT
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ahhhhh that was so sad - more please
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Title: Sapadu
Reviewed By: Sapadu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 06:21 CDT
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Finally, a relationship between Yuki and Kyo without being Yuki/Kyo slash. Yuki belongs with Tohru!
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