"Alternate Yesterday" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Innocent_Assassin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 07:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like where it's headed to. I'd hate to do this but it's kindda hard to know when they're speaking whithout the quotation marks. Other than that I really liked this fic. Keep up te great work!
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Reviewed By: Chris B. On: July 28, 2004 19:28 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is a great story!!!! I haver been reading it anytime I have the spare time!!!!!! I love it I can't not wait to read the next chapter!!!!! YohjiBabe2008
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