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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 06:47 CDT
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*huggles you* I'm glad you continued!! this is good and hopefully updates won't be so sparse *pouts* keep writing!
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Reviewed By: bombayoni nsi On: September 17, 2005 22:25 CDT
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Hot Damn person-like-thing! write more before I sic my plushies upon you!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama (nsi) On: September 17, 2005 22:22 CDT
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YAY! when's the next week gonna start? hurry hurry hurrry!!!
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Reviewed By: demonsbaby69777 On: September 17, 2005 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is good. I hope you write more, showing all of the pilots as bottom. You can't only pick on Heero.
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Reviewed By: kourutusunie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remember this from the ides of march and I enjoyed it then. I thought there was a continuation from after Heero's week. Is there still? If so r u going to post it?
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: Pyrzm not signed in On: September 17, 2005 08:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you're not doing the "each one took a turn and then it was over" approach. Dynamics are developing that are really fun. Now I'm wondering what affect this is going to have on Wufei. Nice little scene with him and 04. And I love Trowa, the perv!
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Title: CH 5 Friday
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2005 07:24 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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No couples?! You are so mean!! Although if you're going no couples, having naughty little hentai-Duo spying on Quatre and Heero added just the right note.Another fabulous chapter! Heero's gonna have these guys wrapped around his little fingers in a minute. Can't wait to see it!
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Reviewed By: Sequal please? On: April 03, 2005 13:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! You, amnazingly, kept them all in chracter while in a situation that wasn't foreseen in the anime or manga. Congrats! I would like one more chapter on this, as a teaser for the sequal. What I mean is, one last chapter where the pick who's next, and then a sequal for that person. Personally, I'd love it to be Trowa. He's another one always projected as seme, don't you think? It's only a suggestion, of course, but I really, really, REALLY hope you'll consider it!
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Reviewed By: dinkscythe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 07:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this. they're such guys, and heero's so practical and clinical and focused on learning and usefully applying his knowledge: my favorite, most IC heero-characterization. it's interesting the way that everyone's quirks are revealed by the situation.
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Reviewed By: Female Heero Yuy *Not signed in* On: February 28, 2005 03:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sweet! You should try to make a chapter where one of them takes Heero on the table in front of everyone. That'd be great! Update soon. Cause you so need another chapter.
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Reviewed By: Female Heero Yuy *Not signed in* On: February 28, 2005 03:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sweet! You should try to make a chapter where one of them takes Heero on the table in front of everyone. That'd be great! Update soon. Cause you so need another chapter.
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Title: More More!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2005 11:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, so I already reviewed this chapter, but I just had to read the updated version again and URGE you to write more on this story!!! I just love it.
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Title: Duo
Reviewed By: Justkat...really On: February 08, 2005 06:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wrote more! My darling Duo's turn! ^__^ I *love* this story. I love the insight that we're getting into all the different personalities along the way: Trowa all hentai and hedonistic (and *so* hot!!), Quatre hideously domineering but in the sweetest possible way, Wufei, we won't even go there, and Duo, fumblingly overwhelmed by emotion and concern: a classic first time. And I loved the way that Heero and Duo interacted...the laptop was *hilarious*...the way that they talked, and bickered, and that, with Duo, Heero was able to be more involved. (Although, maybe that's just Heero's learning curve; hope not.) They obviously have a much closer relationship than with the others. Can't wait for the morning after. Ummm...can Duo have another turn please? ^_____^
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Reviewed By: Vidalark [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 02:36 CST
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Loving it. I can't wait to see what happens next. Perhaps you should think of making a whole series where each pilot gets a week. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Pyrzm not signed in On: February 06, 2005 10:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(I read this on your other site. Did you save your file as text only? I have to do that to keep my formatting intact.) I'm so glad you've returned to this story arc. I've been checking in for updates. And, as expected, it was worth waiting for. I like how you're using the scenario, which could just be a smutfest, to show growth on the part of the characters. The opening of this one shows how some of them at least (Wufie aside) are beginning to loosen up with each other a little. So-----what next? I can't remember, are they going in numerical order? That would mean it's Duo's week next! He's so obviously attached to Heero, I wonder how he will handle having to "service" the others. Heero was more mentally equipped for it, I think. 04 seems sex crazed enough to look forward to it, and 03 is a foregone conclusion. But 05? Yikes! I can imagine him running away to avoid it, unless he has some significant growth experiences with the others. I really hope you'll go on with this. And faster! *g* Hugs, Pyrzm
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