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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@pacbell.net On: June 08, 2004 08:56 CDT
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You claim there is no plot but I think the plot is delightful. Your excellent story telling has kept it from being just another PWP. I adored Heero's (nervous?) waiting... and waiting. The Wufei scene was wonderfully deliciously hot and it seagued into Trowa's so well. I'm glad Trowa tried to be a bit nicer, I felt sorry for Heero losing his virginity so roughly. (I loved Trowa's comments on the mercenaries, btw.) One of the best things about this fic is the switching POV. Love it!
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 22:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh god that was so hot. Now if you'll excuse me I have to go change my underwear.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Terry Maxwell On: June 07, 2004 20:21 CDT
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hey... that was hot... and by the way when is the turn for Duo... 2x1 yay... and pleaseeeeeeeee ther first one in Duos Week pleaseeee make that Heero be the firs of Duo... i really dont like the idea... of another pilot unless its Quat... being the first of Duo... great fic..
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Title: Great Idea!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 08:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! Can't wait to see if Quatre and Duo are a bit nicer to Heero. Do we get to see "Duo's Week" etc.?
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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I hate it when I'm trying to be hilariously funny and ny review gets cut in half. Rats! Thanks for a very entertaining fic.^^ I'm enjoying it a lot. Please, pretty please, can Duo go last and return the favour for Heero, once Heero's learned the "joy of sex" (snicker), and Duo and Heero fall in love (sigh), and be really romantic and cute...please? And,just for the sake of argument, I think that Trowa's fine in this fic (damn fine (hee hee)). Heero seems to think so as well... But the burning question now is...will sweet (gah!) innocent, little Quatre turn into a pint-sized, closet deviate? Hmmm...can't wait to find out!^^ Thanks heaps.
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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 01:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Thanks for a very entertaining fic.^^ I'm enjoying it a lot. Please, pretty please, can Duo go last and return the favour for Heero, once Heero's learned the "joy of sex" (snicker), and Duo and Heero fall in love (sigh), and be really romantic and cute...please? And,just for the sake of argument, I think that Trowa's fine in this fic (damn
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Title: eply to previous review....
Reviewed By: asukakureru On: June 04, 2004 05:04 CDT
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Actually, no, it wasn't badly worded. I said exactly what I meant. I do not agree to the theory that trowa was the slut of the merc unit, and this for three reasons: one, the not hurting someone you're going to depend on in battle thing, second, the fact that trowa isn't very communicative with words BUT isn't afraid of people -- which he would be if he had been repeatedly raped by a dozen or more men. He would be traumatized. Can you see the scientists giving him a gundam if the very sight of men in military fatigues would make him freeze in fear or have a flashback? (he's not afraid of quatre or rashid or the ringmaster either, and the last two are tall, dark-looking men. He infiltrates bases full with soldiers with ease. He's not scared of them either.) And third and main reason, contrary to what people see in fanfics, even if they have nothing else to screw very few men will turn to pedophilia, and only half or so toward other men. Add to that the protectiveness shown by the chief of the unit toward trowa in his episode zero and I REALLY doubt anything could have happened to him.
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 03:09 CDT
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Well... Hmmm, it was funny, I'll give it that! Ok, it was really funny... However, Trowa and the way he described the mercinaries bothered me... He said they were all very horny and that his Captain would screw almost anything that moved... Then oyu went on to say that they didn't show any interest in Trowa because he was barely 13... Hmm, if I am correct they would have had more interest in Trowa because of that... The only thing that really backed anything up was the comment about not raping someone who was going to make sure your mobile suit didn't blow up in your face... I'm sorry, but, you might want to re word some stuff.
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Title: Continue!!
Reviewed By: Lee Yamato On: June 01, 2004 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update soon!!I wanna read more!
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Reviewed By: simply amused On: May 17, 2004 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very intriguing! Please continue, I would love too see how this unfolds! Don't take too long to update.
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Reviewed By: cord On: May 02, 2004 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
::laughs:: i don't know why but this realy amuses me, i can't wait to see the other pilots responces. kinky trowa? WOOHOO! its always the quiet ones!
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Title: *drool*... ... *drool some more*... ... this good... ... ^_____^
Reviewed By: Onee-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 12:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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write more!!! I'm starting to love this story! this is great and you're cruel to stop on a pont like this... I need more
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Title: Hot!
Reviewed By: any moose On: May 02, 2004 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great idea! And I love that Heero offered to throw himself on the grenade, so to speak. So far everyone's motivations are spot on. Trowa the pervert! LOL! I hope some of them are nice to poor Heero, tho! 03 and 02, at least! Wouldn't mind seeing everyone else's week, too. Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: siti On: April 26, 2004 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is good, continue soon please?? i can't wait to see how seme Heero gona bottom for the rest of the gundam pilots,..i bet the lemon scenes will be hot and yummy,..*drool*..^_^ continue soon!!
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Reviewed By: kender On: April 26, 2004 06:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
interesting. keep going.
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