| "Heero's Week" Reviews/Comments [ 62 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vidalark [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2005 02:36 CST
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Loving it. I can't wait to see what happens next. Perhaps you should think of making a whole series where each pilot gets a week. Can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: Pyrzm not signed in On: February 06, 2005 10:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(I read this on your other site. Did you save your file as text only? I have to do that to keep my formatting intact.) I'm so glad you've returned to this story arc. I've been checking in for updates. And, as expected, it was worth waiting for. I like how you're using the scenario, which could just be a smutfest, to show growth on the part of the characters. The opening of this one shows how some of them at least (Wufie aside) are beginning to loosen up with each other a little. So-----what next? I can't remember, are they going in numerical order? That would mean it's Duo's week next! He's so obviously attached to Heero, I wonder how he will handle having to "service" the others. Heero was more mentally equipped for it, I think. 04 seems sex crazed enough to look forward to it, and 03 is a foregone conclusion. But 05? Yikes! I can imagine him running away to avoid it, unless he has some significant growth experiences with the others. I really hope you'll go on with this. And faster! *g* Hugs, Pyrzm
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Title: Checking in
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 16:00 CDT
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Just shooting you a little inspiration for another chapter. ;-) Hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Pix On: August 18, 2004 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually got excited when I saw the update. *laughs* Really good fic. It's fun and playful and really, really hot. I loved the way you portrayed Quatre and I thought that all your characterizations were really good. Can't wait for the rest!
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Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: Esukafruone [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I really enjoy reading this series! The lemons are very hot and their interactions with each other are priceless. And you write them all in character too.*impressed* Please write Duo's turn asap! I can hardly wait!*grins* Really really like Heero and Quatre in this chapter! They're great together!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: shino_hoshi On: August 16, 2004 09:48 CDT
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Wow...Finally found the completed chapter three and I have to say, it did _not_ disappoint. I'm now going to go back to your livejournal and poke you viciously for the next chapter. *grins evilly*
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Title: ch3
Reviewed By: priscel *rubs eyes and yawns hugely* [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oi this was one crazy idea for quat to think of. *snickers* shoot they could have gone out for clubs, spared with eachother but ya know I think that *coughs* a little sexual release is good. Man I can't believe that Heero suggest each of them take a WEEK!! *glares at wufei, quirks brow at Trowa and tries not to drool and stare at a wet-spandex-nipple pointing through shirt Yuy* update some more please! can't wait to see how duo handles it on the giving and receiving end. I think that Duo maybe the last to go. And maybe, just maybe Duo refuses to participate 'cuz it sure sucked that he was out voted and is kinda forced into agreement because of the ruling.
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 15:14 CDT
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*fans self* ohh...and we all know who's next...DUO!! ohh goodness..what is it gona be like when Duo finaly gets his turn...*eaps joyfuly* ..then mayyyyyybeeeeee....the orgy
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Title: Hugs to Quatre
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 07:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew he'd treat Heero better! I loved how playfu and insightful he was with Heero. I always thought they'd be good together. Now----Duo!
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Title: ... *drool*
Reviewed By: Onee-sama ^__^ On: August 05, 2004 01:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I SO love this story!!! I hope you write more soon!!... I'm curious about Duo's aproach... ^_^
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Title: Quatre's turn
Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 01:32 CDT
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Yayyy..Duo's turn next. True love amongst the roof tops...or in the hen coop...or upside down under a Gundam... I still think that that's what's gonna happen 'cause: a) my universe doesn't admit anything except Heero and Duo 4 eva and b)it's just not like Duo to be holding back (unless he has some unspecified tummy complaint). Even Q agrees with me. Has to mean that he's nervous about something. Poor baby. Anyway, great work! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2004 23:53 CDT
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I'm so glad you updated. I've enjoyed this fic so much. I'm glad Quatre was more considerate, even if Heero had mixed feelings. I loved the way you showed that, too, with his attention wandering and Quatre laughing at him. I think I liked that aspect the best: that Quatre was having *fun* and inteded that Heero have fun, too. I wonder if the bruises bothered Quatre?
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Reviewed By: RelenaLover On: August 03, 2004 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is about the twentieth time i've read this fic, so i thought i should actually review it, and all i can say is, damn you're talented! which isn't very helpful, so let's elaborate. you have no spelling/grammer mistakes that i can see, your style of writing is practically perfect and never loses it's impact or whatever i'm trying to say, and the actual content is hot when lemony, amusing when humourous, and never loses the flow. you use good phrases and word your sentances nicely without babbling on for ages and losing the reader's interest, and the actual idea behind the fic is brilliant. you didnt just make the pilots all start sleeping together, you presented it as a solution to a problem with medical statistics and whatnot to back that theory up. so, overall, congrats on a fantastic fic and i eagerly await the next chapter, which should be duo's seeing as i just read quatre's on your lj. Luv Kali
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Reviewed By: keokalae On: July 22, 2004 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even though this is a rather lemony-delicious series so far, you write very well and I hope to see more of it soon. It was a pleasure reading this fic and I will be reading your other fics as time allows. I personally tend to be very critical of those who do not take care in writing their fics, especially those with so many errors that it seriously detracts from the storyline. If you ever need a beta, please let me know and I will happily help.
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 01:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! that was great. If you deside to do Quatre's week, let Trowa go first. I love 3x4 fanfics.
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