| "Homeless" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: LadyFrisselle On: May 25, 2005 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
THis is a good story so far. I would be interested in reading it if you should continue it. I am curious as to how you are going to get everyone together.
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Reviewed By: Windy River On: May 15, 2004 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm liking it so far, please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: Ebony Wing On: May 06, 2004 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice job!!! This is one idea I've never seen before. LOVE IT!!!! Hope you update soon.
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Title: Homeless
Reviewed By: AngeloflightPd [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like this story so far but I do hope you up date soon
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Reviewed By: Something Like Human [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the idea but the delivery needs a bit more refinement. I noticed a handful of spelling errors. I'm not really going for the Father Maxwell child molestor but it's literary liscense. I really did like the story though. I can't wait to see more of it. I like all the street kids looking out for Trowa. I'd like to see more develop between the boys. Write more soon (just run spell check before you post...but be careful! "hoar" means 'white or gray with age' while "whore" means 'a prostitute'.) again good fic! fix a few things and it could be a great fic! (my computer went wonky...if you got this twice sorry!)
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