| "What Naruto Wants" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pancakes [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 12:49 CDT
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*dies laughing at Naruto's misfourtune* BUWAHAHAHAHA!! who'da thought SASUKE of all people would have wet dreams about Naruto?! and yes, i find your twisted sense of humor extremely amusing as well =3 why would Shikamaru know about Sasuke's obsession over Naruto, though? i know he's a genius and all that whatnot... but... o.0 gawd. poor Naruto... XD update soon!! ===Bloody===
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Reviewed By: Riyo-san On: September 23, 2004 16:33 CDT
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I like that story! It's funny! I want to see the rest! I want to see what's happening! Update please!
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Reviewed By: Sabaku On: August 24, 2004 20:07 CDT
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Title: Great fic!
Reviewed By: FFantasy On: July 17, 2004 23:00 CDT
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Oh my god, this is so funny!! I had to save all the funny parts, like the twleve part. Please write more!
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Title: riotous!
Reviewed By: de_tensai On: June 15, 2004 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! I showed it to my sis and she loved it as well. Heck, we even kept retelling the funny parts to each other for our delight. The only reason this fic is one point shy away from a full rating is that its not finished ^^
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Reviewed By: lightstalker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok few mistakes in spelling but i just love the story... oddly i think you might have gotten hinatas thoughts perfectly in character. i think you should have hinata come back she is easly the funnyest character in this story and choji.. i think thats what hes called (inos other team mate)and i think the konnohamaru corps would be good for some humor. bring back kakashi *forms the kakashi surport group*
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Title: ooh!gaara!
Reviewed By: happier monkey On: June 04, 2004 22:06 CDT
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yay! i do like gaara... probably too much...^_^; ehh heh heh... that would be cool if shukaku was thinking simultaneously... why is lee so normal??? i would have thought he was i little stranger... but i guess if you're that strange on the outside... =_=;;; well... whatever! great story so far! ya gotta write a longer chapter though... i almost died when it ended so suddenly... *cries* well, i'm wasting energy writing this much... buh-bye!
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Title: Aww...
Reviewed By: B.A.T. On: May 31, 2004 23:57 CDT
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I'm glad to see the Sand siblings here, not so glad to see a short chapter. All the same, things are getting interesting. As it stands, Naruto has two immediate allies; Shika and Lee. If you're aware of the increasingly popular TemaShika pairing, it'd be funny to have Shikamaru helping Naruto out and when in close contact with the siblings, some really strange things on Temari's mind, but that's assuming you're a fan of that pairing, lol! I'd like to see what's on gaara's mind, and if Shukaku's also thinking simultaneously. All the same, I'll never know unless you update soon, so UPDATE SOON! AND MAKE THE CHAPTER SATISFYINGLY LONG!!! THIS IS TORTURE! -Yusef "The B.A.T." Pittman
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Reviewed By: Nakama [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2004 20:10 CDT
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Yaoi! ^^ Heh. Oh come on Naruto, you know you like Sasuke staring at your ass..
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Title: Refreshing
Reviewed By: B.A.T. On: May 26, 2004 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been awhile since I've read fanfiction, and this was one of the first fics I've read straight through in a long time. I'm hoping you update soon, because this is getting way too funny! Hmm... I wonder what's on the Sand siblings' minds...? And why is it that everyone wants to dominate Naruto? I would've thought Hinata would like to be the one dominated... but that's just me. Hilarious story, not-so-original concept as you said, but as it has been said before, I believe the Greeks categorized all the stories of the world to be based upon eight entirely original concepts, so that's not really a bad thing if done right... and this is done right. I'd do a couple revisions and go back to display thought sequences better (in your Hinata fic, you used italics... that worked much better), but all in all, I don't have too many things to nitpick with.
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Title: Must UPDATE!! XD
Reviewed By: Kazumi Aoi Tenshi On: May 22, 2004 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU MUST UPDATE XD I adore this story and the way you put Hinata in it, I would never thought of that(devilish laugh), and Sasuke, is hilarious, also Sakura with her Sasuke in every sentence!! so.... you know what to do now.... update,update,udpate! n_n
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Reviewed By: happy monkey On: May 18, 2004 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hee,hee... that was so great... it was so funny! i haven't laughed like that in a awhile... the chapters are way too short though! ^0^ hey! would ya, could ya please put gaara in here somewhere? i love the lil guy...^__^ Keep up the good work,indeed! i'm hoping for another chapter soon! *crosses fingers* ^0^
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Reviewed By: mehgirl On: May 18, 2004 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that fic rox! you have to continue it! now everyone knows what goes on in Kakashi's head!!! And Sasuke! Lol! He's so perverted! >
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Reviewed By: *~mara~* On: May 18, 2004 05:32 CDT
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hehe, this is one of the most disturbing yet wonderfully hilarious fics i've read in a while. what you write next should probably depend on where you want things to go, and who you want naruto to pair up with etc. i don't remember if you wanted this to be a SasuNaru or something else. i don't want to make direct plot suggestions, because how the story flows and the plot goes is yours and yours alone. i'd be more than happy to help you more through email if you want. its onejoy1@pobox.com. i'd love to hear from you ^_^
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Reviewed By: temjinxzarron [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man.........that is funny!!! The only problem that i have is that your chapters are too short. Other than that keep up the good work!!!
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