| "What Naruto Wants" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Title: Refreshing
Reviewed By: B.A.T. On: May 26, 2004 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been awhile since I've read fanfiction, and this was one of the first fics I've read straight through in a long time. I'm hoping you update soon, because this is getting way too funny! Hmm... I wonder what's on the Sand siblings' minds...? And why is it that everyone wants to dominate Naruto? I would've thought Hinata would like to be the one dominated... but that's just me. Hilarious story, not-so-original concept as you said, but as it has been said before, I believe the Greeks categorized all the stories of the world to be based upon eight entirely original concepts, so that's not really a bad thing if done right... and this is done right. I'd do a couple revisions and go back to display thought sequences better (in your Hinata fic, you used italics... that worked much better), but all in all, I don't have too many things to nitpick with.
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Title: Must UPDATE!! XD
Reviewed By: Kazumi Aoi Tenshi On: May 22, 2004 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU MUST UPDATE XD I adore this story and the way you put Hinata in it, I would never thought of that(devilish laugh), and Sasuke, is hilarious, also Sakura with her Sasuke in every sentence!! so.... you know what to do now.... update,update,udpate! n_n
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Reviewed By: happy monkey On: May 18, 2004 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hee,hee... that was so great... it was so funny! i haven't laughed like that in a awhile... the chapters are way too short though! ^0^ hey! would ya, could ya please put gaara in here somewhere? i love the lil guy...^__^ Keep up the good work,indeed! i'm hoping for another chapter soon! *crosses fingers* ^0^
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Reviewed By: mehgirl On: May 18, 2004 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that fic rox! you have to continue it! now everyone knows what goes on in Kakashi's head!!! And Sasuke! Lol! He's so perverted! >
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Reviewed By: *~mara~* On: May 18, 2004 05:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
hehe, this is one of the most disturbing yet wonderfully hilarious fics i've read in a while. what you write next should probably depend on where you want things to go, and who you want naruto to pair up with etc. i don't remember if you wanted this to be a SasuNaru or something else. i don't want to make direct plot suggestions, because how the story flows and the plot goes is yours and yours alone. i'd be more than happy to help you more through email if you want. its onejoy1@pobox.com. i'd love to hear from you ^_^
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Reviewed By: temjinxzarron [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man.........that is funny!!! The only problem that i have is that your chapters are too short. Other than that keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Half_Angel_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was in such a bad mood earlier, but that fic seriously had me cracking up! XD Update man!!
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Reviewed By: Angie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2004 03:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
You people are funny. I don't plan to have any pairings. I want this to be strictly humor and no romance. I really do think Sasuke's gay, tno. I mean, if you really pay attention in the manga/anime there are a lot of signs, heh. I just can't imagine Naruto as gay. I dunno... it just seems odd to me. Anyway, I'll update soon, k?
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Reviewed By: NARUTO RULE On: May 13, 2004 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please let Naruto go out with either INO,Hinata,Tenten,Temari,Or the Fifth Hokage. PLEASE NO YAOI!! THIS FIC RULES!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: A Disturbed Mind On: May 13, 2004 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn! I read this and actually fell out of my chair laughing. I can't wait to read more of this. (though I do feal sorry for Naruto with Sasuke,BASTARD,sorry can't stand 'em.) That part with Hinata, I did a spit-take with that one. By the way can you bring Garra,Tamari, Their brother, you know the one that plays with dolls, Tenten and Tsundai or whatever her name is the fifth Hokage. Can't wait for more. Later!
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Reviewed By: mental [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 16:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
o.O.....OK this is the most non lemon fic I've ever read (I din't know those were hentai fics I'm so confused)I like your fic, but why did you make Sasuke a gay pervert and Hinata have freakishly dirty thoughts about him?O.o...I'm to young to read this and I think that Sasuke should be straight this is just plain wierd, but besides Vegeta who said wierd is bad?But seriously why did You make Sasuke gay?I need an explenation those two together is just wrong DON'T make them into a couple please those two together is just plain wierd!Oh well I'll see if I don't get scars for life and see if I can continuse reading this fic, but I still like it.I gotta go bye bye(^_^).
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Reviewed By: PenguinPENGUIN On: May 03, 2004 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha, that was so funny^^ i think ill go finish laughing now.
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Reviewed By: Akira Miyamoto On: April 28, 2004 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic, please continue!!! There wasn't that many problems, thought the charas are a bit OOC (which actually makes this funnier).
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Reviewed By: Hikki On: April 26, 2004 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wai~ That is sooo cool!!! I love the idea! It doesn't sound stupid to me at all in fact its great! I especailly like the stuff that Sasuke thinks he's so weird poor Naruto-kun. Oh well carry on your torture ^__^ and please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Random Naruto Addict On: April 25, 2004 20:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic sucks ass. you made a fool out of Sauske the greatest guy in Naruto, and for that your fanfic got a lower score.
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