| "Long Way to Go" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: jgal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 21:38 CST
Comment/Review:
do keep on writing.... pls let them find each other....onegai
|
Title: please
Reviewed By: dm10 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2004 07:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
please don't stop writing this story! it's the best. i love it, don't stop.
|
Title: don't stop
Reviewed By: 'Tura On: July 08, 2004 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh please don't quit on this story it's amusing and I want to see what happens to poor Ryou
|
Reviewed By: Dreigon On: June 26, 2004 03:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAHHHHH!!! CONTINUE THIS FIC PLEASE!!!!! ^___________________________________________^ So wonderfull!!!!! I love your ficcyes!!!!!! Continue!!!! Pretty please? +puppy dog eyes+ Ja ne!!!! ^.~
|
Title: One More thing.....
Reviewed By: A Shocked Person! On: June 03, 2004 21:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've been SEARCHING AND SEARCHING for hours on end for a fic like this!! Don't leave this poor fic alone! And besides, I don't like seeing Ryou alone.... he sounds so destroyed and imploded... :P
|
Title: WHAT???!!!???
Reviewed By: A Shocked Person! On: June 03, 2004 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOODNESS!! Why are you stopping NOW?? You are already close to the climax!! Don't you DARE abandon this fic!! Please, DO continue!
|
Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story, plz continue on!! Don't leave Ryou-chan all sad and lonely w/o any Baku-chan to cuddle up next to!!
|
Reviewed By: Kitty Candi On: April 30, 2004 06:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
DON'T STOP!!! I'LL NEVER FORGIVE YOU IF BAKURA DOESN'T COME HOME!!!!!!!!! T_T
|
Reviewed By: Rezyra Sugamori On: April 30, 2004 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O WHADDAYA MEAN YOU MIGHT NOT CONTINUE??!?! I come back to this fanfic like EVERYDAY!! It's even in my favorites!! Not many fics make it there ya know. Please continue...I really think your story is great. Don't give up so easily. Find a muse. Eat chocolate...makes anyone feel better. ^_^ Pretty please continue?? *big chibi eyes* Pwease?
|
Reviewed By: Rowan Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 19:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
DON'T YOU DARE STOP WRITING I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH AND WOULD FEEL REAL BAD IF YOU STOPPED!
|
Reviewed By: F_D_C2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 17:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
I vote you keep writing it. I really like it...i mean sure some people may notice and point out the negative things but there are plenty of positive things too! Besides I'm really enjoying it, stories like this are always good ^^
|
Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 00:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ok, this was very rushed. YOu need to take the time to sit down and really work on these things. Do't just fly at them like that. Your grammar and spelling weren't that great etiher... The over use of captions and exclemation points did little to get anything across... And please, lay back on the swearing, it looks tacky, shows lack of intelligence, and des little to show off the characters anger. YOu should spend more time trying to express how they feel through description and rely less on the swearing aspect. It also comes across as horribly OOC. And I don't exactly think you were going for that here... I suggest that you take this off and get it BETAed... Hell if you contact me I'd even be willing to help you out. As I have recently come out as a bit of a BETA reader... Send an e-mail if you're interested.
|
Reviewed By: Haibara3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 19:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok this fic's really good! But sorry if I'm being a little racist but the "Yah" stuff is getting really annoying Could you perhaps change it to yeah or great or something. Anyway your style of writing is really good and your plot even better. Through you could exaggerate the sadness a little more, anyway you have a few small spelling errors but nothing that can't be figured out. Despite all the negative stuff I still enjoyed reading this fic so far so please update soon.
|
