| "Miroku found the one?" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: More Structure!
Reviewed By: Writing Advisor On: January 26, 2005 03:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
Slow down. Plan things out. Tell us who is talking. Give insight into what they are feeling at the moment. Something like this should be a good 3-5 paragraphs. The way it is now, its very fragmented, like a first draft. End at a reasonable point, not in mid-sentence. Finally, finish your work! I know this is a harsh review, but constructive criticism is what makes better writers.
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Title: All Alone!
Reviewed By: Tsukasa716 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 10:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Im going to write review cuz noone else will :'( :'( :'( ppl r so0o0o0o mean!
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Title: hottamlie
Reviewed By: Tsukasa716 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 10:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
oH SNAP!
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Reviewed By: Lyingeyes911 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2004 18:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
it certainly gave me a sugar rush!
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Reviewed By: Triplechaos0 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 18:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay. Take a deep breath, relax, now type. See, now you don't suck quite as bad.
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Title: Coolio
Reviewed By: Rgrl On: May 04, 2004 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOT WOOT! Hyper spyke after this one!
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