Title: Plot sucks Reviewed By: MoonlightMana On: November 15, 2005 20:12 CST Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review: The plot was good but your grammar is very bad I'm sorry but my 5 year old baby sister has better grammar then you work more on your grammar AND Yami/Atemu does not always use magic pratice makes perfect them you need a lot of damn pratice.
Reviewed By:sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 01:33 CST Comment/Review: i really like the plot and such but.... you spell really bad...