| "Soul on Fire" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Lynn67 On: October 15, 2004 05:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Where is the rest!!!!!!!!!! This is a great story so far, please update soon :)
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Reviewed By: justkat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is really good. Nice to see the G-boys acting their age and doing normal, dumb, boy things for once. Can't wait to read more. Thanks heaps.^^
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Reviewed By: darkdragon91 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 22:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE!!! IT IS SOOOOOOOOOO GOOOODDD PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE I NEED IT TO LIVE!!!
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Title: oh oh
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 04:42 CDT
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lol I forgot to include my favorite lines, hehe silly I have a favorite line and you've only just begun the story... Heero gathered up his nerve. "Why is your hair so long?" he asked quietly. Duo smirked at him. "That's privileged info. I'll tell you when you're older." ... just wanted to share, can't wait to have more favorites (^_^)
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Title: actual critique
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2004 04:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
..if you can call it that, i think this version of your story is very interesting, it doesn't remind of the original format of 'growing up girl' but I have to say it, Thank YOU Jake-san!!!, for another wonderfully well written and interesting story. I'm hooked, hmm but that could be biased because I was hooked on your other story as well. This is really good and I'm looking forward to finding out what had Heero turn to drugs when his was with his old friends? And why when he spoke of his parents that there seemed to be adamant in his dislike of them? and his sick feeling when he realized how much smaller his hand was to duo's!? Is that linked to home and his parents too? I love Duo!! lol I like the conversation between Heero and Duo when they were pointing out which one of them were skinner. *bounces in her chair* Can't wait for update! update soon!!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2004 12:42 CDT
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i'm so glad you posted it here! hmm i wonder, maybe I should just comment here on your stories instead of going back to fanfiction. Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Shattered Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 15:37 CDT
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P.S I'm adding you to my favourites!
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Reviewed By: Shattered Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is soooo great! I can't wait to read more so like update soon please?^_^
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Reviewed By: Alea On: April 29, 2004 10:27 CDT
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i liked it ^^ pls update soon..
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