| "Growing Up Girl" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: CircleKV0012 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 03:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the stoyr keep up the good work!! UPDATE SOON Please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: aj_maxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2004 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love your fic. =) I don't mind that Duo's OOC. It's just that the whole story is too good to be a fanfic. It would have been best if the characters were all original, because the characters in your fanfic are just too real to fit any already existing character. When I read your fic, I imagine your characters with the Gboys' physical characteristics, but I don't really see them as 'Duo Maxwell' or 'Heero Yuy' - they're as they are: your characters. Your style of writing is very effective, too, especially the angsty parts. The parts where Duo met with Heero in the grocery, and then they were having problems and fighting with each other ... those parts made me sob. I was crying my eyes out for your characters, they're so real. I think you'd do very well in writing for publication, if you aren't already. =) Good luck with all your writing projects!
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 21:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an absolutely lovely story! So full of genuine emotion. I'm fasctinated by your portrayal of the five GBs; very creative and fun. Duo's fight to claim his identity, and Heero's struggle to accept his attraction to Duo, is very well done. More, please! And soon!
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Title: i like it! :)
Reviewed By: xiao-shan On: May 18, 2004 01:52 CDT
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HEY! continue this story! i really like it! infact i have a hard copy of ur story plus another copy store in my pc. my friends read your fanfic, they say they like it too.... please have another one follow this... :)
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Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: May 13, 2004 06:50 CDT
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You're back. YES!!!!!!!!! I missed this fic so much. I am so happy about you getting more out. I like the way that the story is going. I can't wait till their is a lemon. This is going to be a lemon right, right, right, RIGHT!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Alea On: April 28, 2004 12:08 CDT
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i didnt mind him being OCC i mean...i made Duo into a girl once..but the story inst finisht yet so im not gonna put it up just yet only i made it a girl/boy she is a bit boyish so..well making Duo a girl is hard anyway i know that the only thing that is 'girl' about him is his hair but i made him OCC in every story i made because i just cant think like a guy XD but i have to tell you, Duo did cry alot i mean i only cry 1 to 3 times a year because i dont see the use of it really, it doesnt do anything exept make you tired, i do scream alot but i always start laughing afterwards XD well i cant exactly say my life is the same as the one of Duo in this storie so..i quess maybe i would have cried too? but i luf the storie and i really hope you make another chap soon..i didnt upset you did i?
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