| "How the mighty have fallen" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Read Me!
Reviewed By: Duo/Jon On: June 08, 2004 21:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this fic although fun, funny and overall adicting, could use some work in a lot of departments. Some times what your saying is unclear and hard to follow. Other times you use the wrong word, and some times you just have a gramatical error such as a Fragment that is listed as a sentance. Other than that I like your way of presenting old Ideas and making them seem new, good job and keep up the good work!
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Title: THIS IS GREAT
Reviewed By: vampire_pandora [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 13:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really like this idea it's funny, and i've never read anything like it. Keep writing and i'll keep reading.
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Reviewed By: Sakura Harusame [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was going to review on FF.net, but I decided to review here. This is an awesome fic and it's hysterical to imagine Wufei as a girl. Can't wait for the next chapter! Ja! ~*Sakura
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