| "Foxgloves" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
Title: Foxgloves
Reviewed By: chibibotan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2008 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i'm new here in media miner (though i have an old ff.net account), thought i'd give my fave author a visit and write a review...yay, that's 10/10 on everything. heh. but i've already reviewed this on ff.net right :| well anyway.. it's really good. i dont read much dark fics, but reading the first chapter really made me interested to read on. kinda scary somehow when i read the 4th chapter's going to have a rape scene and all, but anyway... it wasn't bad anyway, and you cut the lemon scene in ff.net (but lol i just read it here today).. i hope you'd find the time to update this too.. :) i voted this fic in your poll because the ending was quite a cliffy! you really got me interested here. it's quite promising. but i'm not trying rush you, i just wanted to review here too. but i hope you will continue this in your own good time. k, that's it.. this is ChibiBotan from ff.net
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Title: Foxgloves
Reviewed By: The great question mark On: June 22, 2005 08:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello there!I am known as The Great questionmark and i want to say i love your stories.I've reviewed your stories before as Nazz2.0.Anywho you should write more or become a writer.Your loyal fans will follow you anywhere!Me?Well i love Botan and Kurama.I also love B/and kurone and B/Karasu.Writed a Botan and Karasu is kinda hard.I'ma posted it up soon.OH,one more thing it's summer! you think you can write more of thief!?Please?I'm so bored out of my skull!!Can't go no where cuss me parentsis always working and i gotta baybsit.I don't even get paid!!So be a doll and write some more?Keep me busy.Oh yeah {Ahem}So comands the great question mark ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????????????????
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Reviewed By: animegirl007 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2004 17:56 CST
Comment/Review:
No!!!NO!!!!Don't make it a one shot...I need more...I was sure you would bring him back as red haired Kurama( I can't spelled his name now)...but this is just as good......PLEASE CONTINUE....I JUST NEED IT......
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Reviewed By: momijifan@sailormoon.com On: September 05, 2004 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story IT WAS GEEEERRRRRATE especially the ending it was do unexpected. Write more
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Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 17:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story ROCKS!!!! i absolutely LOVE it!!!! the dark themes, the drama, the whole damn plot rocked!!!
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Title: (You know already)
Reviewed By: Sarah (^-~) On: August 02, 2004 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Even better in the un-cut version... ^_____^ I do feel sorry for Botan though, but Youko got what he deserved. But, at the same time it is sad, because he did experience some sort of intimate emotion that surpassed lust alone (at leaste, before he died). Why must you do these things? To confuse me? Anyway, great chapter, hope you continue soon. (And don't feel, at any time, rushed to construct/complete any of your chapters/stories, you can tell when a story is rushed and when someone puts their heart into it. I admit, the first three chapters to Foxglove were breath taking, your detailes, description, your phrasing, etc., it made you seem like you were a whole other author with advanced writing skills. This chapter was good as well, but just seemed... a little rushed compaired to the others. Just a little.) I hope you don't think I'm criticizing you, because I'm not. If I've offended you in any way, I apologize and I'll never try to give you advice ever again. Gomen nasai, and hope to see more of your work in the future. Sarah
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Reviewed By: shadowdragon85 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
please do a second story on what happened after
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Reviewed By: ellamoony [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 15:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
grrr evil anti-botan, i don't care what she says your fic was awesome! i hope you post your epilouge soon, i can't wait! i love your fics
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Reviewed By: killthetoaddemon ~NLI~ On: July 27, 2004 19:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
That...was interesting. O.o I didn't really see that coming. But I liked it! ^__^ (Yes, I'm sick and twisted!)
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Reviewed By: animegirl007 (not signned in) On: July 27, 2004 17:20 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god....I can't believe you kill him....What he was wrong.....yes, it was wrong...but, damn wasn't there someway it keep him alive....I love Kurama!!!!....good story I hope you write another Kurama/Botan fic but, let's keep him alive next time.....GOOD JOB.....
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Reviewed By: Midnight Wolf On: July 27, 2004 05:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOOOOO! PRETTY KURAMA!! Wha? Oh. Please update.
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Reviewed By: ThnHorse On: July 06, 2004 12:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update! Update! UPDATE!!! I love your story! Please write more. Can't wait to see what happens next! :)
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Reviewed By: sweetlilbabydoll On: June 24, 2004 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is awsome amd VERY well written i may add, please update soon
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Reviewed By: animegirl007 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank goodness..I found this story here as well as AFF.net...I was so worry that I might miss another great chapter while the site is down....UPDATE SOON...and I miss you could of had say more to that "PERSON" who hates Botan. Really, If you don't like the pairing when why read it....THE MORON...PLEASE CARRY ON WITH THE STORY....IT'S GREAT AND YOU'RE GREAT OF COMING UP WITH THE STORY IDEA.....
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Reviewed By: Mala Darkling [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 04:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it would have to be more graphic to really be "horror." (What does that say for my normal reading material? O.o) Hiei seemed a lil' OOC to me, but you were changing the story a bit, and he could have turned out like that. I'm pretty critical tonight, so I'll shutup. Good story. Have fun writing ^_^ I'm waiting for the next update. ^^
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Reviewed By: TsumeIshida On: June 15, 2004 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me like. Me like a lot. Me like very much a lot. Me thinks you should add another chapter. Botan and Kurama, yea! Vonderful, simply vonderful.
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Reviewed By: Tailchaser On: June 10, 2004 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a huge K/B fan! I liked the discriptions you had in your story. I gave you a 9 on the spelling and grammar, but I don't think it was all your fault~ just some typos. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: death's angel On: June 10, 2004 11:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Its so dark i love it! update soon!
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Reviewed By: AineSironaTsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 19:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ignore anti-botan. I think she's jealous that this story is soo spiffy. *shrug* Updating soon will make me delerious with joy.
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Reviewed By: killthetoaddemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2004 01:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this story even if it DOES make me sick...(course, I knew that already). Keep writing!
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Title: chapter 2
Reviewed By: redwater [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 14:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
write more! it was just getting interesting, again, can't wait for chapter 3! write, more, soon! :)
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Reviewed By: Ugh, a person who didn't log in. "Elisande." On: May 11, 2004 20:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think it's a very good story. And, I think you should ignore that Anti Botan thing, because obviously (s)he's blinded by Botan, and isn't really seeing the story. I do like Kurama and Hiei, but.. I've read a couple K/B and I like yours the best. So far. Carry on! x3
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Reviewed By: Anti Botan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 15:59 CDT
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I'm sorry I don't agree with redwater. I hate Botan and Kurama being paired up. Reason 1: She sucks!! Reason 2: She's ugly! Reason 3: She tp fucking preppy!!! Reason 4: Her and Kurama as a couple is NOT cute so really what I'm trying to sya is this story SUCKS!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: redwater [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn! I love this, write more, please! :)
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