| "The Sinner" Reviews/Comments [ 120 ] |
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 16:41 EDT
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i love it.. update soon
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Reviewed By: lolololol On: May 01, 2004 15:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
rly good update soon
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Reviewed By: hollow angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 23:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whos Ori???(says the girl who hates suprizes) anyway...i read ur 28 days, and i read your dead famous...and i think thats it...this looks like a good 1...update soon please!!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAUTHORESS (not signed in) On: April 30, 2004 21:30 EDT
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"Ori" who is this "Ori"? I dunno but thats why im reading this fic! Great idea and i look forward to find out more about the history between these guys! Also is there gonna be Sesshomaru??? Cuz i love my Sessy! Keep it coming this is greet!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 21:51 EDT
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i love pirates of the caribbean! great movie. well i have no doubt this story will kick ass like all your others do!
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 21:06 EDT
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The scene change to Sango is set up almost as a flashback. For a second, I thought it was Kagome playing cards with her some time before the cruise, and that this experience on the boat was what had her so upset. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~ Heh. He doggie-paddles. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ The captain said it was their best cargo, and they just took his word? I think they'd have opened it. And I smell curse or something. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oooh! I like the similar wind thingie. I bet Inuyasha and Kagome are going to fight over the best wind spot when they finally end up on the same boat. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oooooh! So they already know each other in this one! ...or that "Ori" kid is someone else who happens to look a lot like Inu.
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Reviewed By: physcho_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 20:24 EDT
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Hmmm... i like it, Ori huh? Pet name? i'm totally enthralled, love it! Please write more, and don't forget about your fic 'aurtumn bane' because it's a good story too and i would be very sad if you stopped writing it!!
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Reviewed By: fluffyfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 18:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutly love it! yay, i was wondering when one of your fics would pop up in my inbox. yer on my favorites list after all. anywho i LOOOOOOVE this one! it is awesome and i hope you update soon
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 17:14 EDT
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Wow.. I really like how it is so far... hopefully their paths will intersect soon otherwise this would be an odd story. XD I guess I'll be reading this on mmorg instead of usually reading them on ffnet. Very good job and I hope you will update soon! ^^;
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: inuyoukai2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 16:32 EDT
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Did you know your a fanfic GOD?
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in) On: April 29, 2004 16:19 EDT
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By the way, I love Pirates of the Carribean, it's my favorite movie! ^_^ Update soon! *both of them!*
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover(not signed in) On: April 29, 2004 16:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is Ori, like, InuYasha's former name or sumthin? This chapter was all over the place, but it all made sense in the end. This is a great story, but aren't you gonna finish Autum Bane *did I spell that right?* first? I REALLY wanna know what happens to InuYasha and Kagome's relationship! Kagome was so sad! Anywayz, w/e, it's your choice if u wanna give up that story and write this one, but it would be nice if you finished Autum Bane *if that's the spelling* first. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 15:03 EDT
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Ori? Who/what is Ori?////////// Great chapter! I love it, and since you have such and awesome beta reader, I have no grammar to criticize. ^____^ Keep up the good work!!
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Title: excellent
Reviewed By: NekoFluffylover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 14:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY NEW STORY!! i love it (actually i love all ur stories) that was an excellent beginning, can't wait till you update. good luck wit ur other stories, I hope the new autum bane chapter will be up soon
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Reviewed By: Kate ^_^ On: April 29, 2004 14:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaaaaaay!! XD Good job - your creativity never ceases to amaze me! ^-^ I loved all the little funny parts, and i must say that i love how you always leave so many things as mysteries. Suspense is COOL! ^_^ So yeah. I liked it quite a bit, and it really looks to have potiential. Thanks for taking the time to write! ~Kate ^_^
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