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Title: The Sinner
Reviewed By: Katami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 21:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. What can I say? This is great. I really love all of your stories! Please keep writing!
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Title: YAY ^_^
Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 19:44 EDT
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Omigosh i love this story so much! This sounds so good, and i look so forward for you to update! I love your writing skills and i happily await the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover (not signed in) On: May 03, 2004 17:28 EDT
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Hmmm, maybe someone caught her or sumthin? Anywayz, update soon, I wanna know what happens to InuYasha/Ori and Kagome!
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Reviewed By: YasashiiAme [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 17:00 EDT
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Wow.. thanks for updating so damn fast. Heh. I hope Kagome wasn't thrown into the water.. didn't seem like it though. Anyway, nice chapter. I enjoy these long chapters... I'd rather have longer chapters with less updates rather than short chapters and more updates. Anyway, good luck and update whenever possible. :)
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Reviewed By: Pooglepoogle [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 16:52 EDT
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*grins* Nice story! You have some really neat plot twists. Another thing-Ori's an odd choice of name for Inu, considering that Orri (with two R's) is a traditional dog's name, if I remember correctly. As to why I know that, I'm something of a canine buff, particularly with myths. Anyway, nice job! Thumbs up! ^^
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Title: .
Reviewed By: BlueEyedKorean On: May 03, 2004 16:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good!!! I can't wait for them to actually have a good talk to each other, and Kouga! YES!!!! please update soon!
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Title: Ohohoho!
Reviewed By: KohakuTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 14:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter! There were a lot of cute funny parts with Inuyasha that made my day here at work. (Speaking of work, maybe I should do some . . .hm . . .) Keep it up! *thumbs up* YAY!
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Reviewed By: IYWriterGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 13:12 EDT
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love the new chapter! update soon
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Reviewed By: monkeymary89(not logged in) On: May 03, 2004 12:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all your stories and this has to be my favorite yet! I love pirates! I love inu! Okay, so, is inu ori? Or is ori Inu? It doesn't make sense!!! *_* I'm so confused. . . then again, I'm almost always confused anyway. . . I wish I could write stories as good as yours, but sadly, you are the master *bows down to rozefire's greatness* Keep updateing and I'll keep reviewing!
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 12:27 EDT
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Age three vs age eleven. Either Inuyasha is just a lookalike of "Ori," or someone's been messing with his memories. Hmmm... Whom do we know who erases people's memories of painful events to turn them into his willing followers? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Aww... Poor Hojo. He's going to be so ticked off. Fear nothing like the wrath of Mr. Nice Guy.
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Reviewed By: polpolerri On: May 03, 2004 10:58 EDT
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this is such a great story!
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Reviewed By: Phoxy_kitsune (too lazy to log in) On: May 03, 2004 10:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is so great!! Update when ya can please. And why is Inuyasha mad that Kag is alive? He is Ori, ne? Why would he be mad?...And For a second I thought Hojo was dead...but then he wasn't.**curses**...*lol* I'm not a hojo fan and never will be..*sighs*~~Later, the phox
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Reviewed By: Kate ^_^ On: May 03, 2004 10:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! XD That chapter was great; you're so funny. ^-^ And you write so quickly!! Takes me much longer to write a chapter. -_- I don't understand why he was so upset with her... he was doing it just for show, maybe...? Idk, i'm just confused. About a lot of things. But i LIKE the suspense, becuase later when things are explained, it's much more interesting. ^_^ So yeah. Great job! Thanks! ~Kate ^_^
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Title: Predictions
Reviewed By: physcho_bitch [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 18:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just went back and read your chapter again, and noticed a few things. I had wondered before about the whole "captain said it was their best cargo" thing, so i'm kinda thinking Inu Yasha's gonna get into trouble with Naraku about that, and also I think that Ori actually is Inu Yasha because you used the "the cap was Jammed on his head..." and you used the same words to describe when he put on the bandana to keep his ears covered. I also liked how the scene changed from Kagome and Inu Yasha, that was cool. So i'm making an inference that Inu Yasha is Ori and that they were good friends and their families went on a vacation together and he was supposedly "killed by the fires" but he was really just captured and raised to be a pirate. My question is why was he the only one captured and why didn't they just kill him? And also was he with his parents?? AAARRGGHH!!! only the first chappy and already i'm mixed up in my own predictions!!!
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Reviewed By: jazzyca [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 12:22 EDT
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hmmm...interesting. i like the modern twist to it. i must say that i hadn't expected that. Can't wait for the next chapter so i can find out what happened.
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