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Reviewed By: RabidFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 23:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
The last chapter was kind of choppy and dissoriented. Thats the only way i can describe it, if you need to understand read it begin for yourself and pretend your someone who hasn't ever even heard Vega or the elementals and someone who thinks Naruto got to the village 1 day ago and Sasuke, Sakura and Kakashi a few hours ago.. Besides that I'm glad you updated!! I appreciate it!!! Lots of Love -Rabid
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Reviewed By: RabidFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Explain to me why this hasn't been updated while I count to ten. 1.....2....3...*explodes* why the hell hasn't this been updated! AND why hasn't it gotten more reviews *glares evily at other readers* can't people see a good story when they read one!?!?!?! Oh well I think this is very good story. my only critiscism is that the Naruto characters are way in the back ground..I whish they played a bigger role. And secondly when did Kakashi become an idiot? Besides that I absolutely llooooooooooooooooovvvve your story to death. Keep up the good (great work)!-Rabid
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