| "Darkness of an Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: Update
Reviewed By: ShadowRealm [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 08:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should update this. It's great.
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Reviewed By: paniwi (NLI) On: February 23, 2005 16:03 CST
Comment/Review:
aaah so cute, but it's been awhile hasn't it, plz update soon
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Reviewed By: Almighty Neko-chan On: June 12, 2004 22:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty good story. There are some spelling and grammar mistakes, but nothing that bad. You should update soon! ^_^ I wanna see what happens!
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Reviewed By: anubiset On: May 17, 2004 19:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, great fic. I hope that Bakura gets it together. He is a pain so far. Still gotta love `em though. Wouldn`t want him to be all lovey dovey. But it would be nice if he showed he cared. Hope there is more soon.
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Title: sakayora
Reviewed By: sakayora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 17:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is an awesome story!!! I'm definitely adding it to my favorites lists!!!! Will Ryou and Bakura get together soon? Will Bakura's hand get better? Will he ever stop beating Ryou? Will he?! (Ano...gomen nasai...I'm just so curious!) Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Maruken On: May 08, 2004 00:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awww, that's so sad, poor Ryou, no one has a relationship like him, aw poor albino like boy.
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Reviewed By: random person On: May 05, 2004 06:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! good ficcy! u HAVE to write more! Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: FDC...to lazy to log on On: May 02, 2004 22:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww i love it! Poor poor, Ryou... everything bad always happens to him *sniffles* UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 14:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Did I read this fic before? It sounds familiar enough, maybe I did. Anyway, I liked the 3rd chapter, very interesting w/ Marik & Mariku pillow fighting. Aw, poor Ryou-chan, so sad and lonely w/o any Bakura to cuddle up w/ at night... update soon!
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Reviewed By: The Almighty Elena On: May 01, 2004 20:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like it! i want MORE!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Bakuraluver4ever On: May 01, 2004 06:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is...WOW! I really love this fic. It's so sad yet I love it. I love it when YB punishes Ryou...I know a little wierd but i like it. Please post the next chappy soon I can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: KuraMagicianGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2004 23:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmm, interesting. I'm liking it so far. Hope you update soon. Ja matte ne.
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