| "Bindings (My Kitsune 5)" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
Title: :D
Reviewed By: vapidexistence [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 11:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You haven't updated in over a year. I guess you won't be continueing this fic? =(. I heart your fic ^_^ It's very good. I rated your fic a 9 because it's not the most interesting thing i've ever read but it's still awesome and it's not boring at all ^_^
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Reviewed By: zpluto8 On: July 13, 2005 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's been awhile. Are you abandoning this series? Pity it's one of the few that I really like.
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Reviewed By: SweetMisery1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2005 13:23 CDT
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absolutely fantabulous...please continue soon! I love this series and im going to look for an update everyday! Please please please update! Its very rare that i like a story this much! Love, SweetMisery1
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Title: My Kitsune saga
Reviewed By: AuAgHgChemist [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A one of the best sagas I have read, and I have read thousands of stories. Please finish. 9 for a few spelling errors and some typos ;)(nothing a good copy editor couldn't fix) Hey I will volunteer for that job that way I get to read it first. LOLOLOL Keep up the good work.
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Title: Please update today!
Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 10:43 CST
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I am in a bad mood and your stories place me in a much better mood. please update today
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Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2004 14:15 CST
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You must update!! Its so good to read your stuff and when i am down an dsad your stuff makes me happy so please update soon
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 21:15 CDT
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Always happy to read your fiction.
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Title: HieiAndKuramaLover#?
Reviewed By: melody [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 16:09 CDT
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Yay!!! You updated again!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! Now...go write more!!! ^__^ Keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!! ..........umm, actually, before I go, I just wanted to say how well you write "confrontations" between Hiei and Kurama -- their litte "love spats" make the relationship between them even deeper, as well as adding another facet to their characters! Way to go!!!...........
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Reviewed By: Alstroemeria [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was SO HAPPY when I saw that you updated!! As always, an excellent excellent chapter, and I cannot wait until you update again! The plot is really intricate and I am impressed that you are keeping each part going so well. I'm interested to see explained K's presence in Yomi's territory and also to see if H & K get the Eye out of K and how. I think you did very well in conveying all of the conflicting emotions that both H & K are feeling. The tabloids were hilarious! Thanks again!
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Title: HieiAndKuramaLover#?
Reviewed By: melody [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 22:02 CDT
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Yay!!!!! You updated(finally...)!!! ^__^ I just love this fic sooooo much -- I can't get enough of it! I didn't review every time that I read it, but I must of gone through this arc at least...oh, say, seven times? Yup, it rocks!!! Pleeeeease, write quickly! I have to know what happens, with both the Silent One and the "bad guy". So can you update sooner this time, maybe? Then again, you can't rush genious..... Anyway, keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!! ^__^
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god, you\\\'re back!!! And with an absolutely excellent chapter that leaves me wanting nothing but more of your story to boot. Great use of the kitsune lore by the way, very cool. There were a few grammatical errors, but nothing major. I love how you portray all of Kurama in this fic, the character development is awesome. This story feels more realistic (more true to the story of Yu Yu Hakusho) than almost every other fic of this series that I\\\'ve read. Please continue with your updates.
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Reviewed By: Ataure again [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 21:44 CDT
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Oh my god, you\'re back!!! And with an absolutely excellent chapter that leaves me wanting nothing but more of your story to boot. Great use of the kitsune lore by the way, very cool. There were a few grammatical errors, but nothing major. I love how you portray all of Kurama in this fic, the character development is awesome. This story feels more realistic (more true to the story of Yu Yu Hakusho) than almost every other fic of this series that I\'ve read. Please continue with your updates.
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Reviewed By: mhmartini [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! An update! The plot thickens. I am really enjoying this saga, and I look forward to your next installment whenever you are ready to post it.
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Title: Update soon!!!
Reviewed By: dragonfoxloversforever [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 14:32 CDT
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Please update soon. This story is too good to go unfinished. I cannot wait for more!! so hurry
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Title: HieiLover#?
Reviewed By: melody [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 16:31 CDT
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Wheeeeee!!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!! Times a gazillion to the "gazillion-th" *gives up trying to spell that right* power a gazillion times!!! (And yes, I know that "gazillion" isn't techniqually a word, but hey! Don't cramp my style, 'kay?) Pleeeeeeeease write more soon!!! Pretty please??? Thanx a...um....gazillion!!! Ja ne!!!
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Title: fox
Reviewed By: inarifox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 08:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yes this is a very good story i'm injoying it emincely. please keep on going i want to see the wedding and if silint comes back hes my fav.
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Title: A message about Chapter 5...
Reviewed By: melody [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 01:39 CDT
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Okay, this review is meant to accomplish two things. The first is to thank you for updating -- I can't wait to read Chapter 6! The second? Look at the "title"! I just L-O-V-E-D loved Chapter 5 soooooo much that I had to tell you so. And no, I didn't love it simply because I get all "hentai-ish" early in the morning (veeerry early, ne?). I loved it because it was, quite simply, a work of art. Can you say, "AWESOME"? Times a gazillion? You could just feel the emotions flowing between Hiei and Kurama, and the scenes were so vivid!!! *yawns* Ok, time to wrap this up. I would go into more detail as to why it SO TOTALLY ROCKED *ahem...sorry*, however......I think you get the idea. So I'll just leave you with heartfelt gratitude, a wish for your good health/eturnal happiness/etc., and my "trademark" compliment -- keep up the good work!!! (BTW -- sorry if this is sappy, but like I said, it's late...erm...early...yeah. That, and I'm an overly romantic 17 year old. Honestly, what do you expect? *haha* Later!)
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 17:06 CDT
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That was beautiful, though it honestly felt as though you had rushed through that chapter when you wrote it. There were a few points during which I couldn't tell if they were literal, metaphor, or somewhere in the middle. The youkai mask for example. It seemed as if it had just been stuck in there without any transition. On the upside, I never tire of how well you write your characters and their thoughts. Kurama's desintegrating sanity is also very interesting to observe from the reader's perspective. Hasn't it only been a week or so since the start of this saga? As a side note, that's a lot of sex in the morning, lol.
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Title: inarifox
Reviewed By: inarifox [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2004 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am sooooo sorry i haven't revewed till now i've read all of the arc so far and i love it one of my fav aspects of it is the eye that is talking to Hiei and that Kurama can change almost on will this is one of my so fav storys and i hope you will cuinch my curosity or even feed it more with an update
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Title: HieiLover#?
Reviewed By: melody [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aahhh!!! I. Have. To. Know. What. Happens!!! Please, please, please, please, pleeeeease write more soon!!! This story is sooooooo goooooood, and (as I'm sure you know from my previous reviews...hehe) I have read all that you have posted to date. How could you DO this to us?!?! Don't you know that clifhangers are considered cruel and unusual punishment??? *sobs* See??? I'm already going through withdraw!!! Just the thought of not having any more to read is...is...is.....*hyperventilates* Pweeeease update soon? *puppy dog eyes* ...hmm...I noticed that you have yet to write a *ahem* scene with the Youko and Hiei (with the exception of the first one, of course). I'm reeeeally looking forward to that, and this whole thing with the "Silent One" is very...intriguing..... Well, I'm gonna leave you alone now, but before I go I have one more thing to say: I LOVE THIS FIC -- WRITE QUICKLY!!!
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Title: Bindings
Reviewed By: Alstroemeria [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad you updated- I have been waiting for this part of the story!!! Great job- many questions were answered. Others were raised, though, and I hope you update soon so I can know the answers! I loved the fashion show- that was so Youko- and Hieis response to it. I cannot wait for the wedding. This is by far the best portrayal of a HK relationship I have come across. THANKS!
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Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 22:49 CDT
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I can't believe I forgot to mention this, but good job incorporating the whole feeding thing into the story. I really liked how you did it, sounded very technical and precise. :)
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Title: ^^
Reviewed By: Ataure [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 23:38 CDT
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Oh man, oh man, oh man! I'm impressed. You covered quite a lot of ground in four chapters compared to the previous stories. lol. Awesome, I'm hooked all over again. The scene where Hiei was forced to be submissive was interesting, a new facet to Hiei. I have to admit that it challenged some lines and didn't exactly fit my imagined mold of the flying shadow, but definitely good natheless. I'm glad that the issue of Hiei being seen with two different men was addressed. Along that line, the fashion show was wonderfully tantalizing. Begging for your next update as always.
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Reviewed By: Youko Kara [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you finally continued the story. The last chapter had me kind of confused, but I hope you update soon so I'll get a clue. Love it!!
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