| "Love Affair" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: AWESOME
Reviewed By: licoricefactory [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2010 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! I've read it before on Fanfiction.net but I can't find it there anymore. Somehow, the fic does not come up when I use the search bar. I'm glad I found this site and looked your story up. Anyways, what a great story. I mean, it's hot, it's naught but it also has a great plot as well. Dilandau is perfectly in character and I can't help but drool at how you portray him in this. Hitomi's cute too, with her being innocent at first but then would actually succumb to her deepest desires. I loved it!
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Reviewed By: escafoo On: September 18, 2004 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great story developing. You've done a good job bringing the characters to life. I enjoy the sex scenes you throw in, too, so please keep that up as well. I can't wait to read the rest of the story; this is one of the most enjoyable fics I've read. Thanks for your hard work.
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Reviewed By: escafan On: July 13, 2004 01:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really enjoyed this fanfic. I sat here and read it from start up to the current update. I couldn't stop reading it. I love the fact that it started out as a sex driven story and now you have added plot. A lot of authors can't do that, even professional/published ones. Please continue you work, I would enjoy reading the rest of your tale.
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Reviewed By: escan fan On: July 06, 2004 03:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a pretty good fanfic.. pls....pls...pls...pls...continue this to it's very end. There are some problems with the gramar and spelling but all in all it is really worth the read!
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2004 00:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I read this fic first on ff.net. I don't know if you are going to continue updateing in ff.net or here but I hope you continue it has it's intriguing parts. I would like to see how you work things out. You have started to make Van a bit of a jerk so that is a good start to moving him out of the picture as an all out good guy.
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