| "inuyasha and the lengere store" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Katch_L [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 19:10 CST
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the @'s confused me alittle but other than that pretty funny, i can see inuyasha doing that.
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Reviewed By: Sinashi On: December 24, 2005 19:38 CST
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oh god. *praying* plz NEVER let me have to explain to a guy what lingere is *stops praying* and bad Kagome telling him that she'll tell him in two years, what you have a date set for it? *looks at question* you know what never mind i've really gotta think before i say (or write) stuff (h* i've gotta start thinking period). Seriously if i ever had to explain/talk about something like that i ask of my friends, just kill me. Oh well it's a good story so keep on writing. Well see ya i've been grounded so i've got some reading to do. Bye!
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: animefreak2234 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahahahahah...ahhahah that was halarious (cant spell) it was really funny my sides hurt now ..*owch* hahhah thanks for the fic it was great!!
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Title: lol!!
Reviewed By: vampirgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2005 20:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, that was funny! im not sure inuyasha wood actually do that, but i gotta admit it wood be funny!! that was great!
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Reviewed By: silver_neko_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2004 20:25 CDT
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*dying of laffing* hahahahahaha, maybe that was Kirara, after all, she's a demon and could still be alive!
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a pretty funny story, but i think you should try making the lines shorter and just so you know, kilala is actually spelled Kirara , ok. other than that i think it was good and hecka funny! ^_^
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Title: Yamia
Reviewed By: Yamia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this one-shot was very,very funny,even though i was trying to not imagine Inuyasha in that....*blushes*,anyway,this was good,you should consider writing chapters for this....yay you!!!!^-^
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Reviewed By: Aurora DeNeil [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 11:56 CDT
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HA HA HA! I'm dying of laughter! That was great!
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Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 00:12 CDT
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now THAT was sumthin to read. very funny. very interestin & VERY original. kudos 2 u. ~*~Cat~*~
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Reviewed By: Mangagirl128 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2004 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!!!!!!!! That was hilarious!!!!!
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