Reviewed By: GeoFount [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2004 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've never watched Escaflowne so this story didn't have as much impact on me. Again your grammar, spelling, and sentence structure is great. You're making me jealous LOL. I liked the fact the girl who is younger than him was able to see his problem when he was unable to. I especially love this line: I can't get anything through to him. He lives in the past and does not think to the present. I live in the present; for me, the past didn't exist. So how can we talk of shared anything, if we share nothing?
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