"August Affair" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Reviewed By: Gaara-chan On: August 29, 2004 22:53 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: PLEASE Update!!!!!!!!!!!! This story is good, I like it. You must continue, don't worry about reviews just write!! XD I wanna know what happen with the two of them, they are one of my fave couple. ^x^
| Reviewed By: anubis_himura to lazy to log in On: May 25, 2004 07:43 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *Squeals all giddy like!!!!!* Yay! Did you know today is my birthday and you just made me very happy!? I am sitting here in Literary Magazine class and I'm bored as hell! and I am reading fanfic to be less bored, and of course on Musicals.net and now I am extatic (can't spell) but yay! I feel really awful for Serenity though, and Jou *tear* but yay! I am happy happy happy! I know I'm a loser but ya know what? I don't care cause I'm happy! yay! *happy dance* okay ignore my ramblings, I have got to be the worst reviewer on the planet! but eh, its okay because your story rocks and that makes up for my lack of review skills! hehe! ^_^ great job by the way!
| Reviewed By: DugFinn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 13:49 CDT Comment/Review: Ooh.... That's so... Sweet. *tears up* Awww... Kinda' quick, though. And mostly OOC, but who cares! 'Cause it's a fic, that that's all that matters! Ooh! Update soon, ne! Why would Jounouchi say that to Yugi?! He'll make it up to Kaiba won't he?! He has to! I wonder how the gang will react? Hmm... Heart of the cards, my ass! But, really, it's a good start! Keep going! PS: You might wanna check your punctuation, ne? *wink*
| Reviewed By: Anubis_Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 16:14 CDT Comment/Review: o0o0o0o ^-^ hehehe, Jou with his shirt off, lets ponder that . . . *goes into pensive silence until she drools and everyone laughs* hehe sorry! And Seto too! *sigh* I really like it so far, I think its going to be fun! Of course anything is fun when you got Jou and Seto chillin, in a pool, toplesS! ahh! hehe, I am such a hentai. ^_~ I hope this is continued, I love Jou and Seto. How many times can that be repeated from me? Too many! SOrry I'm blabbing, but yay! ANd now, I shall leave you with a final comment . . . Jou topless!
| Reviewed By: Yami_Kari [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2004 03:37 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: :) this is realy funny, please continue...^^"
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