| "Show Me Love" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: Sakume Yatana On: February 05, 2005 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not only is the story dull in plot and flow (yes I DID in fact read it) it also contains the dreaded and hated MARY SUE CHARACTER! Sorry honey, but there are only 12 Zodianimals, and thats that. besides that you've made a ton of mistakes from the series. Sheesh...
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Title: by shi(i'm too lazy to login right now)
Reviewed By: your friend On: November 29, 2004 17:22 CST
Comment/Review:
don't listen to that kittyperson. kittyperson doesnt' know what the hell its talking about. i'm starting to type the vampire story, so i will email you the better version, k? hurry and finish this story! i'm cold, i can't typie
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Title: ok . . .
Reviewed By: Kittyperson On: November 28, 2004 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is bad! You shouldn't be making up zodiac animals, because there are only 12! And Only stupid people pair up mary sues with original characters! Mary sues are fine when they are minor characters, you know! And when two zodiac members hug, THEY DO NOT TRANSFORM! Bold
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Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 12:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
babble babble babble...that's all i do!
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Title: shigare
Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 12:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cigare....shigere...shigare...hehe....I love this chapter! so funny! "freeze and rewind!" hehe...i laughed. ayame and that other dude...i forgot his name already, dang it! anyways, yeah, they're funny. more fighting! more fighting! oh yeah...HARRY POTTER IS OUT TODAY! HARRY POTTER IS OUT TODAY! I can't wait to go see it, can you? by the way, i have a new email, and it sux! loving1313@sbcglobal.net. i can't go to regular yahoo and check my frenchie_ghost_loving email without my mom knowing...bah! anyways...getting off topic here. hurry up and update! cigaray...shigeray...okay, now i can't spell it! maybe i should just give up?
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Title: me
Reviewed By: ayames_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2004 21:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm going to update this weekend! It will be up tomorrow if not tonight!!! so Please read and don't forget to Review!!
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 06:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 16:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
am i not a suck up?
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Title: blah....
Reviewed By: Love101 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yaaaah!!!!!!!!!!11 You better continue or i will never talk to you ever again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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