| "Meetings" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: innocent_asassin On: July 08, 2004 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol! I love your fic! I reccen it`s one of the best I`ve read! I mean, If I read I fic I would usualy read a quite short one coz it gets a bit boring along the way. But yours I hae to say, I could read forever! So keep up the great work! Oh...and one more thing...If you ever get to a lemon part in this fic...could you PLEASE make Omi uke? I`m kindda an `Omi-is-an-Uke` fan. Oh...if Aya/Ran gets any lemon...make him Uke too please ^^; But I love your fic by the way!
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Title: Little advice...
Reviewed By: LAChick [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 20:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I tryed to read you're story. I read up to ch 11. I really did try but it's so confusing and jumps around so many times. I honestly don't know what is going on. It is a good try at a story but maybe if you combine some of your chapters together (because their reallt short) and write in more details, it will be easier. I know you're thinking "who the hell dies she think she is?" Well from expierence. My stories are far from good but I say it is good to get another persons point of vier because you can fill in the blankes but no one else can. If you ever want more suggestions or have anything to say e mail me at JC_oro_Kenshin@hotmail.com. I am always open for ideas for my story too.
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